All Comments on 'Fishing Trip'

great story love it

She doesn't fuck anyone but Rob but the poker games are another story? The last part, and the following sentence, clearly implies that she fucks the guys during the poker games. Make up your mind.

A slut whore wife is a slut whore wife and a husband that encourages them is a wimp ass wipe and the authours that write this crap like it might entertain a real husband or wife Always gets a lousy vote from me

Good story but needs better character development. Also, why couldn't she and her husband sleep on the deck instead of a bunk bed?

I agree with the other poster. If she fucks only her husband, what does she do at the card games. let the guys piss in her mouth and shit on her chest?

writer needs to make up mind. wife is either ok with what is happens or isn't, can't be both. several times during the story wife talks about how turned on she was, followed up by comment about how she is pissed off at husband for whats happening. she's supposedly unhappy about having sex with other guy but doesn't mind cutting a deal for it. and then if the guy cums before she does she sucks him hard again so she can get off.

and i also agree with others comments about ending.

not a bad story but writer needs to be more disiplined.

Will be great in a second chapter when she can forget that ending and just be happy to fuck them all, other wives involved, there's potential here

Sabineteas has a wicked sense of humour, tinged with the obvious need to experiment, with sexual variety. All wives should be similarly accomodating as 'Missy', over communal occasions, assuming a consenting husband? Luckily, mine is!

Rob is one very lucky man !!! I wish I could get my wife to do the same. John.

You can do anything you like with your wife. Just hang her by her toes on the hook in the ceiling and go for it !

It is guarantied to work !

Look forward to that.

I read almost half of the first page before I was totally disgusted with the story and stopped reading.

I am a sucker for coersion/seduction and your front story has that. Well written.

Sabinteas,

A great story from your early writings. Enjoyed as I do all your stories. I hope you’ll write again.

Granted, these 2 idiots deserve each other but really ???? I know it's a story but how stupid was she to even go on a boat with 6 men and what a wimp of a husband. He sold her to them for a promotion - and she still loved him - why?? He's an asshole and so is she.