All Comments on 'Driven'

by Native Tear

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good story :-)

Thank you for sharing this story....with the exception of the gushy/lover bits, this slave enjoyed this story immensely. sg

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great Story!

I loved the gushy stuff as others call it. I think that is what is lacking in the rest of these slave stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
EDIT

Your usage of pronouns is appalling. Her then I, makes for a very hard read.The story would be great if it did not have the grammer error.Get a good editor.

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