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There might be something to be said for "if you can't beat 'em, join 'em..."
But he didn't try to beat 'em first.
At the very least, he should confront her and let her know that what he's doing is the consequences of her actions and not just stepping out for the fun of it.
Another wimp ass cuck who thinks he is a man. So sad
Why would Norm worry about slipping up?
Penny needs to feel the pain of Norm stepping out and fucking other women. Norm needs to confront Penny and tell her that she is on a very short leash and that he has the evidence so, she needs to stay at home and be the cuckqueen to his cupcakes unless she wants an immediate divorce. Leaving this story at this point is just too unimaginative and this author has the talent to give us a better ending. How can a man like Norm that has already shown us that he won't tolerate a cheating wife with his first divorce put up with Penny fucking her cousin Jack? I can't rate this story as is unless it's a low score so, I'll wait to see if Bob will give us another chapter or a different ending. Well written but, I just don't like the ending.
Bubba
to anonymous with the title oh hell no
Your story is better than this so I'll give you a 5★ and jpb 2★
for my thoughts...sure
It's a JPB story - and a good one - this sort of thing should be expected.
To Anon "Oh hell no" dude...just right the story, loved your synopsis, you've got the gift. Open and use regularly - please.
Yo Roberto, what IS the story regarding Miss Pauline French. There must be quite a tale to be told pthere. Or is it your intent the she remain virginal and unsullied by any of your perverted perambulations...just asking.
To the Alt-Right/Trumpettes with the "cuckie" fetish/fixation/fascination merged in an amalgam of rage and revenge...I feel your loss, you'll be okay, keep taking those meds.
Back to "Penny" - I think JPB needs a Book of Names, it's easy to get repetitive at his age.
Personally, I think the "Joan" call is an excellent first step on the road to recovery. In the unforgettable words of I don't know who, "It's cheaper to keep her." Oh, and if by chance (or intention) some kids enter the story don't forget to do the DNA tests.
To: Oh Hell No Anonymous
The comments section is for comments, NOT stories. Thus the term "comments section."
anon 2-13-17
When those stories in the comment section are better than jpb's I say go for it. If you do not like comments where people write about their experiences then do not read them
JPB'S effort was missing on so many counts would have to write''story'' to list them
nope
Story should have a follow on, she needs to be confronted.
She has cheated multiple times.
So she willa gain probably.
He needs closure on this, cheating himself solves nothing.
And you cant love someone to death and cheat on them that many times. And in their own house also.
So another chapter please.
I couldn't do it
Penny got her entire family to vouch for her (not that I think they knew what was happening), this borders on gaslighting. She knew what his ex-wife did and then did the exact same thing, says it would kill him and does it anyway. I'm not against reconciliation, but she didn't deserve it. That being said, if the narrator thinks exchanging affairs is worthwhile, it's up to him.
2*
The ending ruined the story Bob.
MCPO Jim
Okay Story
Okay story. Three Stars.
Not really liking the outcome so much. Don't have to burn her, but I do think dumping her and letting her family members that vouched for her have a copy of the two tapes would be a better outcome. Maybe the family got played too, so they should know.
Let her keep screwing her cousin and move on. Why stay with someone like that? She even used her family to lie to him and then kept right on cheating...many times over. The next time, may be its a "real fun" college ex-boyfriend. Or the guy she "had the hots" for but couldn't get because he was dating a friend. Or the guy with the "big Johnson" from Grad school. Or the guy who had the "most talented tongue".
I think planning "one last time" is pretty much saying "until next time". It is not like she can't come back for more latter on and who wants to monitor that heifer for the next 10 years?
Obviously, it is the authors story to take where he wants it to go. I do appreciate his effort.
another one of your crappy stories
you are without a doubt the biggest pussy around
Great story and you sold out. Just another cuck husband
# 2
Glad to see you back.
Bob's back.
Gawd you sicken me.
We need more writers on LIT, got so desperate for a story (patiently waiting on stangstar) that I lowered myself to reading 1 of JPb pussy story. JPB reminds me of Matt M--Whom I stay clear of. No matter how slutty the wife, he's ALWAYS going to stick his tongue & dick in the swamp pussies. I think this is what disgust me the MOST. She was fucking her cousin‼️😕😕😕😕 do you have any idea how fucking gross that is? At least warn readers geez‼️. The fact that her cousin was her first should've made the hubby vomit but not JPb's male character... No, the sick fuck actually sees the cum slut view.. I'd LOVE to read a JPb story where the husband isn't some cum-sucking-sloppy seconds loving-braindead weak ass wimp cuck. Please 👏👏Stang hurry up‼️‼️‼️‼️
Danger
Seriously dude, chill with the texting.
Real talent
Yes Bob is back.....* 4..........
😀
Yep, same old Bob. It was a five just up until the last few paragraphs. Three stars.
@ Danger09
I cannot say I agree with your assessment of JPB , he has some really great tales , and he has some that make my blood pressure go out the roof . But he's still one of my favorites , and I certainly hope that he'll keep posting !
As for StarStang , he is still posting on SOL. Guess he got tired of the same ol negative comments that his newer stories received here on Lit. Hop on over there for his new stuff .
Lost me at the end.
This was not a one time thing. First lover my ass! She cheated repeatedly and had her family help her cover it up. Planning, execution, lying. She should not get a way with it. No matter how much remorse she feels after repeatedly cheating.
Well,
he can't trust a single person in her family. They all know the truth and not a one of them had enough of a conscience to refuse to help her engage in a lie.
So where does he go from here?
Nice, but
The story is very good, classic JPB, In fact I wonder is it not a repost based on the fact that Radio Shack went bankrupt in 2015 and one would e hard pressed toi find a store much less one selling spyware.
"I love to death..."
You really have to stop using that phrase. It's been a go-to phrase for so long that any ironic quality it may have had -- it's almost always used while she's in the act of cheating, which is contrary to her words -- have been lost by the redundancy.
Ba da burr rump, tip your waitress.
I bought some Olympic performance condoms. I took a gold one out and told my wife I was going for the gold tonight. She replied, use a silver one and cum second for once.
I gave it five stars
Classic "just plain Bob" with the use of the stand up jokes, too the excellent pacing and a twist at the end. Please keep writing, you are my favorite. Panther fan.
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