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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/13/17

I don't get it?

Is this chapter 5? If so why doesn't it say that? Or is it chapter 1? Who the hell can tell because this guy hardly ever finishes his stories anyway! It looks like this is the 5th chapter. Will there be a 6th?

This is ridiculous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1 fucking star only because there are no negative stars I can give.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Just plain bad

JPB has written a bunch of stories, most of them are some sick shit. This isn't the sickest shit he's written, but it's not very good. Some old jokes and rehashed crap from a bunch of old stories. I'll be generous and give it a three. It should be a two.

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by kimi199002/13/17

Not in the upper echelon

This just wasn't much of a story. I've always disliked the "we met in college" flashback that takes up half the story. I've heard all the jokes and read all this before in other stories. Uninspired. When it dumped into incest I was out. Try again.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Dude! She was fucking her cousin?

And the guy is going to keep her around after a little revenge? You're a pretty sick puppy, JPB.

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by chytown02/13/17

Good Read****

Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Old guys...

Emptying your hard drive of old fragments or are you so disinterested now that you are still recycling "and I went to Radio Shack" phrases into your stories...

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by Anonymous02/13/17

The tragedy of LIT is that no matter how poorly written the story, some poor bastard is sucking the typist's cock in the comment section before the bits are dry.

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by Ntropy58602/13/17

I'm disappointed with you, Bob....

For a guy who describes himself in his bio as a "dirty old man," you really should have gained a strong enough grasp of the English language to realize that "woman" is singular, while "women" is the plural form of that word.

The whole story seems like something thrown together just to publish, man...and I will confess that I've come to expect better than that from you.

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by bworth194302/13/17

stone cold

Marriage is over , now they will be just fuck buddies, Penny just doesn't know it yet.
Please finish the story . Hate it when there is no resolution.

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by carvohi02/13/17

Oh For shits sake...

Some comments are just so asinine.

JPB writes what he writes the way he writes, and he just happens to be pretty darn good at it. This was exactly what it was supposed to be; something fun to read.

You want to read some wimp cuckold read that UK guys "Irresistable impulse". Want to read something complicated read something by Beermaker. Want something long and fanciful read Stang Star. Want something heartfelt try Slir Puff. Want something over complicated read me. But if you want to have fun read JPB. Now don't get your bowels in an uproar.

This was a five.

Thanks Bob. Keep em coming.

Jedd Clampett

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Story was ok.

What we do not need is some fuckhead telling us what to read.
4*

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by Anonymous02/13/17

UGH get over the landing strip story idea, you've done it to DEATH, it's no longer funny, and he should just dump the bitch, but then you're a wimp aren't you JPB?

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by LordSlamdawgg02/13/17

Starting to suspect JPB is in Michael Jordan with Washington Wizards phase of his Literotica career

Doesn't elevate he used to, not a real threat to win championship, though always capable of isolated brilliance, motivation seems to be he loves the game and still better then majority of competition.

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by Ximand02/13/17

1 star

He literally has no reason to stay with Penny.

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by Crkcppr02/13/17

This is Straight Forward JPB

This is the story that made Milwaukee Famous ! Oh , wait , that's the wrong item , oops !
This is the kind of story that made JustPlainBob 's storytelling career . Yes it had it all , stand up at the Landing Strip , to a cameo by that stalwart , Pauline French .
To any of you folks who only discovered this site in the last two days , this author has several hundred little gems just like this . I know because I've read them all.
Any new readers , before you go diving too deep into his catalog , read his open letter .
Also , if you're like me , stay away from stories that are 3.7ish or below. Those are ones , as described in his open letter , written for sites that only published those awful story lines .
Thanks Bob.
4 *'s

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by christmas_ape02/13/17

came here to read this story. was not disappointed. thank you!

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Oh hell no!

The story was good but didn't end like I hoped.

My wife was one who never lied. At least, not until the end. She might not volunteer something but if I asked, she would tell me the truth. Unfortunately, I asked the wrong question.

My wife wasn't a virgin when we married, in fact, even with the little pussy I'd had, I knew she wasn't particularly tight. I'm a bit over average, 7" and almost 6" around. The two girls I'd had before my wife both seemed to think I was big. Now to the question.

I was curious about her past sex life. She'd had two men before me and one, the first, for almost two years of steady fucking. I asked her about losing her cherry, I'd never popped one and she grimaced and said it was terrible. I asked why and she told me about the terrible pain. It felt like he was ripping her open and it took weeks before she was healed enough to try it again. The second time was almost as bad, but after that, it not only got better, but with a dreamy look in her eye, she told me sex became wonderful. As it turned out, she admitted his cock was huge, too big for a girl to lose her cherry to and then he pounded her with it for two years, much of the time twice each day.

She admitted his cock was larger than mine and with a little pressing, she finally told me much larger. At least an inch longer and thicker yet. While he couldn't go for hours, like those on the internet, he could fuck her for twenty minutes straight, then a half hour rest and pound her another twenty minutes or longer.

There is something worse than a cheater, it is someone who lies for that cheater to their spouse. I'd heard my wife's first love had moved back to town and had even been seen where she was a waitress at a small café. I never thought too much about it, I was in love and we were bound together for life.

A buddy who knew the story and also her ex--they had all went to school together, was the one who clued me in. He had saw them leaving the café together and was curious enough to follow them. They stopped at the boyfriends house and didn't come out for forty-five minutes and she was back to work before her hour lunch break was over. I'd screwed her that night and she didn't feel any different than usual.

I spent the next few weeks taking an hour off each day during her lunch break and finally caught them. It was on my wife's day off and I was parked across the street in my boss' car. She had told me she would spend the day with her parents, going over old pictures.

I recognized his car from my buddies description. It was a red Dodge Charger, brand spankin' new. When he pulled in, he didn't even knock, just walked into my house. Pulling out my phone I called my In-laws and they said yes she was there, but in the bathroom. I spoke to my father-in-law and that lie cost him a broken jaw and me six months in the slammer.

My phone was in my hand on video when I tiptoed in the back door. The noises coming from the master bedroom were unmistakable. The door wasn't closed all the way and I simply pushed it open a few feet to see him mounted up behind her, pounding the hell out of her cunt. She was right, that fucking thing was a brute. How she could take it so easily at barely 5' and 95lbs, I'll never know. But her cunt was making a squelching sound while he jack hammered the hell out of her.

Three minutes of video and I changed to camera. They noticed the flash after the third one and when Jannie saw me, she screamed. Switching back to video I caught it all as she tried to hide, Tom pulled out and tried to get into pants with a giant boner. Planning on letting him go unscathed, I'd see him in court, I couldn't help tripping him as he went by, hitting his head on the hallway wall. After giving him some serious thought, I told him to wait and made Jannie dress and leave with him.

I had her served at work and my cousin was sitting there when it happened. Surprise, surprise, Tom was there while my soon to be ex worked. When the papers were delivered, she broke into tears and he took her home, his home I assume.

Her parents came with her to pick up clothes and personal items. I let Jannie and her mom in first, and when John came in, I was cocked and ready. My feet were set and my swing looping wide. Not expecting it was what broke his jaw and I went to jail. Before I heard the door close behind me, a couple buddies and coworkers helped me empty the rental and put everything in storage. I even cleaned out every dollar from our bank account expecting to be lambasted by a judge, but she didn't complain.

A year later, a divorced man and out of jail for almost six months, I heard news that left me feeling much better. Jannie had left Tom, although they were planning their marriage, when she caught him in THEIR bed, fucking a neighbor woman. I almost died laughing, especially when I heard he gave her something. Yeah, my sister works in billing at the local clinic.

Although I avoided anywhere she might be like the plague, Jannie finally tracked me down. I'd bought a little shack a few miles out of town on eight acres and on weekends worked at fixing it up. Without power, I packed water from town and used a lantern at night. For a single guy who enjoyed fishing the nearby river for salmon and steelhead more than anything, life was perfect.

Eighteen months after our divorce was final, I was sitting on the porch one afternoon, getting ready for some fly-fishing for summer run steelhead. I'd never saw the car before and didn't think too much about it, until Jannie stepped out. She looked good, too good, as she walked toward me and up the porch steps.

Thankfully she started out by apologizing, both for her actions and her folks lies. John's busted jaw had healed but it did me good to hear it still ached when it rained. After the niceties were out of the way, I asked her bluntly what the hell she was doing at my home. That's when I was blindsided by her asking if there was any chance for us as a couple again.

I didn't have to answer. My wife of six weeks walked out on the porch, with her own rod in her hand. Yep, I'd met her on the river and fell in love with another fly-fisherman, or fisherwoman, to be more accurate. We had went out for eight months before we married and she loved my place and the way I Iived. Not only was she tall, lean and beautiful, she was a slightly used new model. She's only had one boyfriend and that for a few months. Her pussy was tighter than any I'd had in the past and she complained I was almost too big for her.

My ex was nice enough to congratulate us before she left. A few months later she moved to a larger city instead of staying in our tiny town and a mutual friend said she didn't want to see me and how happy Jules and I were.

Life is good when revenge is living a clean life.

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by sugna02/13/17

What a Lot of People Would Do

This is a scenario that I think a lot of people would take if they have the opportunity to take it. Once you have been cheated on for all intents and purposes the marriage is over. So, instead of a big drama scene and playing the victim, why not start to detach yourself from your spouse emotionally by cheating on them? It is probably far healthier than some kind of operatic/tragic ending to the marriage. It also provides the opportunity to mete out a truly just revenge to the cheater. Especially in this case where she didn't stop once she had been caught. This strategy also allows him to financially prepare for the divorce. At the end, he should make sure the rest of her family was aware she had been fucking her cousin and that they had been used as part of the cover up. Hopefully they had been lied to as well and not part of some sick conspiracy. Her relationship with her family will be irreparably damaged if she lied to them.

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by Richie411002/13/17

Confused

I like your story telling and this was a good one right up till the end. I suspect that you left that to me as the most likely outcome is obvious. However, this "Penny" story is so unlike the others that I'm left wondering why? This makes me wonder if this is the same Penny and is she still the slut you created earlier? If not, why use the same name?
Still enjoy you and hope you will not confuse in the future
Regards

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Style

Not your style JPB to produce a story that needs a crutch at the end to lend support!!
Great writing though, looking forward to more.

VBR
19pvc44

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by Impo_6402/13/17

This story is two in one...

This story is two in one...If you don't like the story, you will have fun with the jokes...But after reading the comments, I found out this was 3 in 1...One reader wrote his own story, similarto JPB's story. As @ JPB's kind of story. The ending staying open: will this marriage survive much longer? All respect is gone! 4*

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by tazz31702/13/17

THE OLD GOOSE AND GANDER ROUTINE

and it is more enjoyable than a divorce, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Would love to see a follow up where Norm is discovered by Penny. Her investigating and hearing Norm with Joan. Then discovering he knew about Jack.

It would be interesting

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Another JPB story left hanging

please finish a story. You would get more 4 or 5 stars if you did

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by MattblackUK02/13/17

Another first rate story from JPB.

Lot of bad stuff happens at the Landing Strip.

I would like to see the next chapter in this story.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

1*

whores and cucks. basically they are ALL cheating assholes. it was rather meandering for only 2 pages and lacked a decent ending. I didn't care for the dumb jokes either.

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by sbrooks103x02/13/17

Thoughts

Many typos.

I’m with those who don’t need chapter and verse on pow they met, etc.

"Bran saw you” – If Bran is there, why can’t Bran just talk to him right then? Obviously they have to go outside.

Very minor nitpick – Her friend is a wannabe comic and has never shared her jokes with her friend?

I don’t see why them going into the motel room wouldn’t be sufficient. They both live in town, why not go to one or the other’s home if it was innocent?

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by Anonymous02/13/17

I liked it

a good story and a good read. Just an issue: His name should have been: Norm Jokes.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Now we have two cheaters

Why would the wife have a fling with her first knowing how they meet,was it worth the risk. Now he cheats to get even. No trust ,no marriage, no future together. Any chance they will have children so they can screw up there lives too. Not a good finish here.

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by bruce2202/13/17

Lots of Fun

A bit of JPB hits the same spot as JD.

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by Onethird02/13/17

Bloom off the rose

Another nice ditty from JPB. He must be getting mellow with age, since he let things slide at the end and did not wreak vengeance on Penny. I guess the kernel of distrust will fester and they'll split up after a while, and I bet the forbidden fruit of her first will temp her again. To the people who complained about the story being unfinished: do you not recognize what a finish looks like? Do you only read fairy tales where people live happily ever after?

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by kage44002/13/17

Pretty good with a surprise ending.

I liked it, I would have liked more sex but it was a great ending. I'd like to see a part 2, with Penny catching or seeing Jack and Joan together in a restaurant and a confrontation and reconciliation. And with more sex.

Yes, a part 2, even with the jokes.

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by kage44002/13/17

Whats the deal?

Is this a new Penny story? I read the Penny Ch.1-4 stories but with a different Penny and Roger instead of Norm. I'm confused.

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by jasonnh02/13/17

Not quite there

JPB neatly tries to wrap things up by making Penny remorseful and planning to rededicate herself to her husband so all is well except for a spot of necessary revenge, right?

Hmmm? Could you really relax around a wife that, given the right excuse, is willing to step out on her husband? Maybe she sees her husband in circumstances that make her suspicious (but not really justified) and decides that SHE is entitled to some revenge? Maybe her mom dies and she is upset and steps out for some solice? It's like a whore bargaining for the right price. A whore is a whore because she is willing to sleep with a guy for money. The actual price is just a detail. Penny is deciding what price she needs.

A faithful wife won't cheat under ANY circumstances.

Whether Penny actually does or not doesn't matter. He can't trust her. She irreparably broke their relationship. He has chosen to live KNOWING she can't be trusted. The relationship is no longer the one it was. Maybe HE will decide in the future that he can step out under the right circumstances as well.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

She was fucking her cousin?

That was some weird shit. He's going to stay with her after that? Ruined the story, as far as I'm concerned. That's one twisted bitch. Dropped it from three stars to two stars.

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by silentsound02/13/17

Too interesting to end where it did.

I was hooked and really wanted to see the fallout and aftermath.

This needed exposed and confronted or at least confronted with Jack getting his incestuous ass handed to him and Norm fucking around on Penny while she has to just weep and keep her slutty legs closed.

Disappointing ending to a very intriguing story.

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by mike969802/13/17

Crap

So fucking your boss for a promotion is wrong so it's divorce. But fucking your cousin because, well just because, that's okay. Just fucking stupid. First off incest is disgusting. No way in hell. Also, when you've been cheated on you gain a hatred for cheaters, you don't become a cheater. The only way this story could've worked for me is if they had young kids and he was going to stick it out for their sake. As is this sucks. What the fuck is he gonna do when her favorite cousin wants to spend time with them. Go out to eat with her family.shit like that. Not to mention whenever her family gets together they will be teasing him for thinking his faithful wife was cheating on him with her cousin. So 1*

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Usual From You

You should post your stories in non-erotic because they are just depressing and this is Eroticom for erotic stories which yours certainly are not.

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by Harddaysknight02/13/17

An observation on Lit stories in general.

It seems that if a husband catches the wife screwing another guy, but professes her love for her husband while doing so, the husband is much more receptive to reconciliation than if the wife bad mouths the husband while screwing the lover. Somehow it just seems easier to accept. The betrayal is the same, but the perception of the severity seems to lessen. I wonder why?

The lesson for cheaters? You never know when you are being watched, recorded, or even videoed, so never say bad things about the spouse during sex with the lover, regardless of how much you're enjoying the lover.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Needs a Part 2.

...

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by green11702/13/17

@HDK

Well, there's that... why dis the old ball-and-chain, you are after all messin' 'round. which makes it irrelevant...

And, it seems the old home week of writers here is off and running. Got something (newish, not red) to contribute? I'd certainly read it...

Green-something

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by green11702/13/17

continuing...

Newish, not red, perhaps a bit sweet -

Sounds like I'm asking for a Riesling...

Green-something

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by RePhil02/13/17

It's only revenge

If she knows about it. If she doesn't it's just simple everyday ego.

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by Pappy702/13/17

Not much to recommend this story.

Same old stuff, and same old stupid wife and weak husband. I see why the first wife's boss almost handed him his own ass in the confrontation. Jack should have been crippled and Penny should have her marriage stuck up her ass. If she loved her husband so much that it would kill her to lose him, it should have made her sick to think about fucking around on him. Especially after the way they met.

Excellent writing but no substance to the character of the husband. I remember my first lover as well but I wouldn't have anything to do with her that would put my marriage at risk. And I wouldn't even think about forgiving my wife for fucking her first or anyone else. One way? You bet. Head should rule the pussy, not the other way around. And the family should also have their asses kicked. Family reunions are not the place to troll for pussy.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Liked this

Similar here. Wife #1 got drunk while I was away, ended up with one of the other guys in our band at the time. She was "sorry" but then did it again.
Wife #2 liked to pick fights and storm off, that took me about 3 times to figure out she would go off to see old boyfriends. She was sorry, too.
Girlfriend #3 (by then I was sick of expensive ex- wives) had an affair with the guy living next door while claiming to be with me. When caught cold, she was "sorry."
Girlfriend #4, same thing. Also "sorry."
Me? Faithful the whole time, kind of wish now I wasn't. But, oh well.
Then, ran into a gal, dated. Watched how she was for over a year, then moved her in. She was tickled, lived with me for almost 10 years, good woman. Married her, now it's 35 years later, still here, still a good woman.
I guess it's worth it to keep trying.
Nice tale, thanks.

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Well written story with some grammatical errors

But cheaters are just ugly people. There's no getting even in my book. She flat out lied to him and had her family back her up. So she comes from a long line of liars. If she'll lie about cheating, what else will she lie about? Simple answer? Anything and everything. How do you live with someone like that? Never knowing if you can believe anything they ever tell you? I guess you do what Norm did. You become just like them. A liar and a cheater. If the rolls were reversed, commentators would be screaming for her head. Glad to see you posting new stuff JPB. But this was one of your stories that I'll have to add to the "Did not like" column.

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by VickieTern02/13/17

Relatively speaking

With all those standup jokes preceding, I expected this story to end with a Real Life punchline. Joan telling him, "If I can't cheer you up, same as your wife I've got lots of cousins who can!" or "If your Penny's short-changing you, call a Copper!" or "A wife saved is a wife earned, especially when her name's Penny' or "What is this story, a game of Penny-ante poke her?" Well, OK, maybe not any of these, but have another PBR on my tab and start a contest.

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by mike969802/13/17

Some confusion

From some commentators. Her family didn't lie to back her up. Her lover really was her cousin.

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by ManoBlue02/13/17

I needed closure!

Good that he gets revenge but he should have confronted her!

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by Anonymous02/13/17

Boring, boring, boring!!

Long, drawn out and boring. Not your best effort.

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