All Comments on 'My First Mature Woman'

Congratulations on your first story.

I give it a 5 for pornography at it's best. A real cock-raiser!!!!

When I read the phrase "thick as a pop can" I knew immediately that you were from the Midwest. LOL

Some more details please. Explain her outfit better etc. Don't just say panties say a black lace thong etc. How'd she have her hair done etc. Great story though 5 stars

She was short about 5 ft 2 plump but not to big just right. She had blonde hair and blue eyes her body was great a huge ass and huge breast. She looked to be around 45. up as the door closed. She walked over to the till where I stood. "Hi can I help you?"

No commas, to break up and structure sentences. Periods tossed in like throwing bread crumbs to birds: seemingly at random, and rarely where they need to be. And that's not even getting into garbage like describing her as "her body was a huge ass and huge breast". And I still don't know what "up as the door closed" is supposed to mean.

Par for the course, if the course was Gibberish.

Oh, and no: I won't blow smoke up your ass and offer you a participation award, "for trying". Your story was pointless, and your writing was talentless. The only way this story succeeds is if you were aiming for "bigly bad".

Still read to the end. That must mean something. Not sure what.3e7d

I'm a 59 year old woman and my young neighbour who is 21 services my old pussy regularly. He loves to bury his face in my enormous soft tits and works his way down until he's munching on my very hairy muffin. His penis is 12 inches erect with a lovely pair of very full low hanging balls that swing about during sex. At first I was embarrassed about my aging body but he loves to see me bouncing on top of him, my huge boobies flying about all over the place. He's the first man to give me an orgasm (previously I'd only cum through masturbation) but being young he can stay hard for hours so I can enjoy the orgasm building up. Just recently I've really let myself go and I've squirted all over him _ which he loves. Young cock for my old puss any day.

at his wee wee best

A good story and quite a lot could be true. I love the older woman, always grateful of an extra bit on the side when the 'old man' can't make it often enough.

Didn't like the way you spoke to the lady, woman don't like being called sluts. The size of your penis is a bit exaggerated, we all have dreams!!

Thought the lady was going to be the 60 year old in the chair having her hair done. Scope for a story there.

Now the 59 year old neighbour being serviced by the 21 year old is so true to life. She had more than likely seen him grow from boyhood to manhood and watched his body mature. No doubt seen him without a shirt on and in shorts. He would love showing off his maturing body. A little bit of flirting from her, reciprocated from him. Pop's round to see her when the husband is out or she offers him a cuppa, they'd both be grateful.

Like to know the 59 year olds story as to how her old pussy got serviced please.

Have lots of good memories of older woman, many my Mum's friends, bit of charm and a joke worked wonders. Mum suspected me and kept asking searching questions.

Look forward to your next story.

REgards

The number of spelling errors and incorrect usage of to/too and your/you're is mind boggling, not to mention the lack of punctuation that might help the story become readable.

Free advice: Read your work aloud to yourself exactly like you've written it before submitting it and subjecting others to your efforts. You did put work into the story but it was wasted effort. Literotica usually rejects work like this but I guess somebody was asleep at the switch.

Nothing like a mature pussy. I had my first experience when I was 24 with an older family friend. That experience convinced me that young pussy was not for me. Since then I developed a relationship with a neighbour who is 25 years older than me and we have been engaged in a fuck-fest for more than 12 years. We see each other 2 or 3 times a week and spend the nites and days sucking and fucking. She claims she was always left wanting when her husband was alive and now she feels fulfilled with my hard young cock and cant wait for our next coupling.

Mature woman are all way hot and wild, younger are good, great story, its been a while that i read something great, thx

You went to the trouble to write and submit this story, so we can assume you got the bug--now take the next step; get a book on grammar and creative writing. Also, start by reading every posting here on LIT's own writer's resources. If I can learn to write a fair story, so can you. cd

There is an old country song called older women are beautiful lovers. That is so true. Since I had my first older woman I no longer fuck women younger than me(Oh I'm 46) I find that older women are more open to fucking and doing it in more places than the bedroom. I will not fuck a woman unless she has big TITs as I am an avid fan of big TITS. This story turned my on as I also love covering the woman I fucked with my Cumm. From her head till her Juggs are covered in it and it is dripping off her Nipples. Currently I am fucking my best friends mom. She is 55 blonde hair blue eyes 48DDD TITS and a shaved pussy and nice round ass. I fuck her in all of her holes and she loves it like the woman in this story

My own experience with older women is extensive. From the age of 19 when I had a 56 year old friend of the family. We fucked for three years regularly. It was great and a wonderful learning experience. Over the years there were many more older horny women. A woman boss and a woman client who did business with the company. It was a wonderful experience. Amazing how these intelligent women melted and did what ever I wanted. My cock isn't more than six inches in length ( 4 1/2 " in width),

but I learned to eat them into a frenzy. Yes, I love older women. Now, I'm 51 years old and involved with a 67 year old woman and a 73 year old woman. They are great fucks.

Seems like my experence isn't all that unusual.

Very unlikely for me now. The years DO add up.

Good luck all.

A spell check would help the flow. Maybe even an 'editor' or proof reader!?!?!?

Great Story,

Would love some more, wife cheating with young hung boys, pool boy etc

Thankyou

so...his ex- couldn't handle his whopper but they were together 5 years...?

was she a masochist...?

"Oh my god your huge - it’s the biggest one I’ve ever seen!” - isn’t it great when they say that!! 😉

All the extremes are quite fun