Darla's Games Day 16

Wonderful

Thankyou for an insight into your world.

Thank you.

wow

First: Thank You for completing this story, even after that long time ! Second: again Thank's for telling us a little bit about Your life, and as long You know the end and the beginning You can write whatever You want in between. Third: please keep on writing, i'm always hooked by Your stories, can't stop reading and sometimes i even wait a few years to read the next one :). I wish You all the best for Your future life !

Game over, time out!

Thank you...

Thank you! I was with you from the first post of Darla's Game and I ALWAYS held out hope you'd return and complete this story. I've shed too many tears over this story and have re-read it many over the years! You did justice to the characters, though I confess I was hoping to see Carrie turn table on Darla... but then again, that wouldn't have been Carrie the Victims deal. Thank you, and I hope to follow whatever direction you take us! Thank you too for sharing your story, make the story even more real I guess. Thank you again, Terry.

Please give some Happy Ending to Carrie and Julie

I have been waiting for years for the next part and as you have written at the end about your life experiences I cried too, I myself have so much connected to Carrie that I also put myself in her shoes and feel her pain, so please PLEASE give Carrie some fun and Love with Julie and Let Carrie WIN...
No matter what happens in next chapters or stories like nasty, Erotic, Humiliating or Exhibitionist but please make it with Happy Ending.

Love u sooooooo much.

Rape story

" I do not condone abuse or rape or any such thing, no means no."

And yet all Darla, Farin, Courtney, and Rebecca have done is rape her throughout the entire story to the point she hospitalised herself by punching a tree only now to have Jill continue to rape her after she beats her unconscious and kicks her around. Now she is gaslighting Carrie and Julie and getting Julie to assist in her continuing rape and abuse.
For someone who claims to know that no means no and has been raped and abused so often I guess you're ok with gaslighting and rape.

This is not BDSM & Humiliation. This is rape, sexual assault, assault with intent, assault with intent to wound, cruel and unusual torture, emotional and psychological distress, unlawful imprisonment and placing a subject into a state of fear and alarm - all of which would have been simple grounds for self defense when Carrie should have picked up the knife in the kitchen and stabbed Charles, Jackie and anyone else between her and the door.

Sick story. Glad it's over. 1 star.

Asthenolagnia

Hello Panthergirl. I don't know if You'll read these comments, I hope You do. I think the condition You speak of in Your note may be Asthenolagnia. It is a condition of arousal from weakness or being humiliated. I too have had fantasies You write about with Carrie about being aroused by being forced to serve the hated Rebecca. I have the same fantasies about serving rivals in my life, none of which I have ever acted on, yet anyway! What a wonderful story. I found myself also being engaged with Carrie, it is like we got to know Her through Your writing. And what wonderful news regarding extra books! I am blessed as I found this story only a week or so ago and was able to read it practically from start to conclusion. I doubt I'll be able to find the same connection in reading about Jill as I am more wired like Carrie but I am certainly looking forward to finding out. Thank You so much for Your efforts; despite Your personal setbacks You have done a wonderful job!

Asthenolagnia and Dacryphilia

Yes, Asthenolagnia is one of my diagnoses and the other is Dacryphilia, arousal from crying. So, it's good to know there are enough other people like me to give the... irregularities a name.

I was about to disable anonymous feedback, but seeing as more of it is positive than negative, I changed my mind. I don't usually feed the trolls, but today, I'm going to make an exception. For the vast majority of you who appreciate my effort, I apologize in advance.

To the other Anonymous, the ones who like to veil themselves in anonymity while talking a bunch of shit... What the hell is wrong with you that you would read a 535 page book just to say how much you hated it? Be thankful at least it is free and you paid nothing for it. So, henceforth, you are forbidden to read my works, go away and trouble me no more with your stupidity.

To everyone who reads stories on this site. People spend hours of their precious time to write these FREE stories. They deserve your respect whether you like their material or not. I wouldn't waste my time reading some vile vanilla novel about 'true love'. gag! barf! gross! But I wouldn't go to an author who writes such fantastical unrealistic romantic crap and give them a 1 because it didn't appeal to me.

And OMG if I read another idiot posting about how... 'that's not bdsm' One person's vanilla is another person's kink and vice versa. Take your puritanical ideals to your own church and I will take a gang bang from my demons in mine. If you've never role played a virgin being beaten and raped on a pirate ship, you've never really lived in my humble opinion. (True story, that was the first time I ever had a squirting orgasm)

I'm quite clear about the content of my stories, if you don't like it, stay the fuck away. I don't write it for you.

Again, my apologies for my outburst to the majority of you who enjoy my stories. I seriously adore you. It's nice to have people appreciate my art, for writing is an art.

Furthermore . . .

Hey, I appreciate Your rant. I feel the same way about anonymous posters. Readers are clearly warned about the style of story they are about to read and here is the important part, if they so CHOOSE to read this style of story. Idiots.

Anyway, I forgot to mention something in my previous comment. I always found it strange that Darla owns Carrie almost as property yet (from what I can remember) never uses Carrie sexually for Herself. It's never really explained why either. Not yet anyway. I assume it might have been out of respect for Farin? But that would seem unlikely? I can't yet commit the time to reading this again but am looking forward to a second reading as soon as I can. Thank You Panthergirl.

Totally agree with you Panthergirl

I totally agree with you Panthergirl about your comment on 02/18/17...
Its your Favour on us and the Writers like you who writes such Heart Touching and Mind Capturing stories for FREE FREE FREE....

Oh by the way I was the one who was begging you to give Carrie Happiness so Sorry if I hurt you too, It's just as I said earlier I feel like Carrie and I cry a lot after something happen with her. But I like it when something Nasty, Suspense or something where risk of getting caught is involed.
Please dont block me I want to talk to you. You are an AMAZING Writer.

If you allowed and consider I have few suggestions which I would like to read in story as you see it fit. Only if you allowed -
I like Risk of getting Caught in School thats my "Kink" so
1. Make Courtney force Carrie to loose her skirt and hand over her and it will be totally upto her wish whether Carrie will get it back or not and When and How.
2.At least Once Carrie should be naked in Class where student are obvious about her nudity, and maybe Carrie is on the last bench maybe she is just completing a task or just for Julie or Courtney's amusement.
3.Carrie must be naked in Hallway for whatever suitable reason that too in school time.
4.Courtney using Carrie to wipe her pussy in bathroom after... u know
5.Julie taking Carrie's Pics on different locations including school obviously and She or Courtney taking Carrie on Car ride in her Birthday suit.

Once again Thank you for your Precious Time, Efforts and your Writing. Sorry if I said anything wrong or make you angry its just School is my Kink but with Carrie, its just another World.

Love You and God Bless You. Soooooo Much Happiness for You ;-)

Love the novel !

I can't tell you how many times I've read this entire story, and pleasured myself to them. Sad to see it end.....but excited to to read the next novel.

Kind of a long wait for this poor ending

2 years? I hardly think anyone is going to go back and read the previous chapters after all this time. So adding these two chapters years later seems like a waste. And the writing just doesn't warrant the effort. The whining at the end was out of place. Take the time to realize you're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth. Throwing out sob stories makes no sense. And then the rant in the comments section? That just made me laugh. I'm sure if I look up Panthergirl in the white pages, your address and phone number will pop right up. Yeah right! We're all anonymous here. And everyone of us has our own opinions.
You have yourself a super shiny, nice day now - ya hear?
1 star.

Feedback

If all you're trying to do is write a variety of sex scenes with something resembling a story around them, the you should keep doing what you're doing. The individual chapters are certainly hot enough on their own to warrant continuation.

If you are actually trying to write a story, then Darla's Games got really stale after about the third chapter.

I offer you this feedback because you actually created an interesting character in Carrie and the overall concept of the story is doable. Unfortunately, what you basically created to this point is "Carrie wakes up, Carries gets sexually abused, Carrie goes to bed." Rinse and repeat.

This story would have been so much more interesting if Carrie had fought back. I don't mean protests or punching Courtney in the car, but honest to goodness seizing her power and refusing to be a victim through whatever means necessary.

Unlike most on this website, you have some writing chops, now you need to be disciplined about writing an evolving story instead of just the variations on a theme you are offering now.

Maybe you'll read this, maybe you won't. Maybe you'll consider the words. Maybe not. But the feedback is meant honestly. You have the ability, you just need to write a better story.

as a long time reader/fan i am happy to have you back! it been awhile -- i thought maybe you had writers block or got tired of the story line.. But reading what you have gone through in your young life saddens me! i pray you will have the strength to get through and move on!------I am looking forward to further adventures of Carrie ------my favorite was the "gimp suit"------you not gonna give her some kind of telekinetic powers are you? and she gets all pissed of and she burns down Jill's house

I appreciate that

I will definitely keep that thought in mind as I move forward with my writing. I agree with your assessment. Thank you

Disappointed

You can consider me wanting to do the same as the world through this story. I read this, and was crying! Literally crying! You never planned for Carrie to escape, to have a life, even though a few chapters made me hope! I sincerely hoped she would go to the police, get her parent's help, or SOMETHING!! But no, you made her broken, wasted, downtrodden, and actually CUTTING HERSELF WANTING TO DIE!!! Do not write a single thing like this again. I understand it's all in your head, but this is just sick, sick and disgusting and those who enjoyed reading this are sick as well. All I wanted to do was arrest all those women and throw them in jail with rapists to get justice, while at the same time taking Carrie away from everything and telling her parents and the police all of it. I'm not reading a single other thing by you, consider my aggravation and hatred for putting such a sweet, independent girl through all this!

Your NEEDY Fan is Sooooooo Happy!!!!

Goddess J,

I have so missed that genius mind of yours! I kept checking your profile, and was thrilled to find your new chapters today. I am so sorry to hear about your troubles. I truly hope that your writing helps you work through things. You have been missed!!!

so there is going to be next part or the story ends here?????

I m sorry but I m new here but I like your story a lot but m not able to understand that are you going to write and continue this story or this is the final chapter?

Please reply ok I will keep checking here

I just read through the whole story in two weeks after the new chapters have been posted, for some reason I never picked it up before.
This is beautiful and cruel at the same time. Wonderfully written, highly erotic, but for most of the time I just sat here thinking "Walk away!". But then again, those are exactly my type of stories. The painful and torturous ones. As a reader I try to show the same spirit as the main character, knowing/hoping that at the end of everything there will be a happy end making up for the suffering.