All Comments on 'Massaged by a Nerd Ch. 02'

Good job! Loved this.

First time ever commenting, please tell me there will be more!

But she does keep letting this guy touch her.

he is masterful at seducing her!

I just adore the point of view that you provide, the thoughts in Alicia's head, her internal conflict, it speaks to me. Just a delicious little read. Thank you!

Thanks for all the kind words :)

I am working on a part 3, but it's not quite finished yet. I'll try my best not to disappoint any of you!

I love it. The nerd is a little derwisj, devilishly pulling her from the prescribed track.

Where will this lead to: I can't wait!

Really well done! Hard to believe you haven't written a lot of such stories before.

I love that it's from the *female* perspective...and also very perceptive.

Please share more of your *gift* with us, sweetie. :-)

Very well done, this has me wanting more amd hoping that there will be a future for these two

I have been here for almost 20 years and read thousands of stories under various categories, many of them very good and we'll thought out. But yours was so well done and hit a subject so seldom written on that were there an Oscar for writing you would have it. You often wonder when you see a couple together 'how did that happen? And you explored that brilliantly. I would love to talk with you more. You can reach me by email at ibmagic_jrc@yahoo.com. Have a great day.

Looking forward to:

1) her discovering she can't cum at all without Mark (no longer sexually attracted to Kyle)

2) her discovering how Mark developed all of this "experience" (clearly he's been around the block with women).

3) depending on how long this goes, would love to see this story turn into the nerd cuckolding the jock (Kyle discovers the relationship, knows he can't do anything about it since it's the only way she can be pleasured, and he discovers he enjoys watching Mark fuck her if they allow him to)

Great story and looking forward to the next chapter!

There's a innocence in this story that has me wanting to ask:

Is our author over 18 ?

Very brave of you Mark, overwhelming Alicia to get it on in her bedroom with pops and mom down stairs. So in all the excitment I have forgotten our couple, are they seniors this year ? Its gonna be a long hot summer, and I'll bet a foot rub that Alicia kisses Kyle after blowing Mark ! She'll feel bad about it, while feeling so good...

Yes, both the author and the characters are over 18. They are in their senior year and it's spring. Graduation is just around the corner for these guys. :)

Would like to see her belong to mark

You write very well, and I just discovered you in Literotica, and I have now read three of your stories. I have thoroughly enjoyed them all. I'm personally not that excited about the aspect of Alicia's guilt for cheating on Kyle, but rather on her inability (or lack of desire?) to resist Mark's manipulation and skill. It's also sweet that Mark is now getting "revenge" through sex for all those years when she manipulated him with her good looks, and his isolation from what sounds like a superficial high school community, although perhaps that's redundant.

And so well done. I am jealous of your ability to use tone to create the sexuality of the story instead of using extreme sexual acts.

Thanks for writing.

Thank you for writing this beautifully orchestrated story and helping me have the best orgasm I've had in quite a while!

...on Literotica that actually gave me an erection. Well done!

amazing stories. Please write more!

These stories are some of my favourites on thia page. They are so hot 😍😍 I too want you to write more!

"It tasted unusually sweet, like he prepared for this with a diet aimed to sweeten his load."

Looks like somebody really cares, enough to research and work at pleasing her...

Delicious Story!

This is precisely the kind of story I come here for. 100% awesome.

Honestly, in rating stories on Literotica I throw around 5s like manhole covers and am much more apt to rate good and very good offerings with a 4. Burrogirl, I can offer no criticisms here, constructive or otherwise. So very erotic and well constructed! And I love the constant sexual tension and how beautifully you craft it. This is a very easy 5! Thank you very much. On to your next sexy offering.

"Don't!" I moaned.

Sweatheart, it's a woman's right to change her mind. I'll bet he didn't mind. Try this on for size

5⭐ best cheating story ever

that too with a sweet yet highly seductive nerd instead of your regular trashy selfish dominant pretty alpha boys

oh i am so jealous

another fantastic peace

she is cheating on with mark who really cares abt her who is both sweet naughty and a gentle pervert with a yummy big dingdong

this is the 1st time i have ever enjoyed any cheating story

oh i want a mark as well

stupid alicia mark loves you way more than kyle would ever do

besides kyle must be two timing on her since he is an alpha most of the alphas are always cheatin on their partners

what mark does is only a man deeply in love with his woman do

he is always gentle and caring for her needs he is patient enough to wait so long to seduce her to submit to him so sweetly and gently ahh fkkknnn hot mark

he is a marriage material ;-)

This isnt a cuckold story, Kyle didn't deserve this.