All Comments on 'Caged Bird Sings Ch. 01'

by hisbelovedroisin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
WTF

Wtf is this. Abuse is not BDSM.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

seems like could be a good story but it does seem like abuse and non con

hisbelovedroisinhisbelovedroisinabout 7 years agoAuthor
Give it time...

I'll give you all a hint:

This is NOT the person she ends up with. Promise. You just have to bear with me. Give me time, and you'll see it's WELL worth the wait.

xoxo,

hisbelovedroisin

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Interesting start. Good job setting the stage and building tension.

If the main of the story will be bdsm, okay, keep it here. However, you really need to both tag it in more detail, and expand your introductory note. It's not just about being longer and more involved than a stroke piece. Let readers know that where it starts isn't where it will stay or end. Many of us a a bit protective of the category not being abused by noncon content.

Methos_Death_on_a_HorseMethos_Death_on_a_Horseabout 7 years ago

Ok folks. In the little disclaimer for the story she says that it's based on true events but the names have been changed to protect the identities of those involved. "ryan" is an abusive fuck, but as she says that's not who she ends up with. I speak with some assurance on this matter, just ask roisin.

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