damn that is one sexy read from the word go it just keeps getting better until the "climex" is out of this world. hard is a understatement,steel is more like it loved this story. "jakk"
Loved it, please expand... keep "up" the good work :p
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Anonymous01/03/07
i liked it but...
i really liked the story, and i liked the theme, but personally i like a little bit more bacground on who the characters are, etc. this is the first piece of your work i have ready so maybe this comment means nothing, but thanks for writing a panty/incest story as i am partial to a nice pair of panties with a little bit of taboo involved.
It's nice to read about characters with big cocks. And its not as uncommon as one would think. All 4 guys I've had had over 6-inch cocks. Also, if women have to read men's stories where nearly every woman has huge tits and is blond petite and athletic, and we don't complain, men should stop complaining about cocks in stories that are supposedly "above average." This is the first story I read that described a girl as being pretty without her being blond/giant-titted. I appreciate that.
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5 of 5
damn that is one sexy read from the word go it just keeps getting better until the "climex" is out of this world. hard is a understatement,steel is more like it loved this story. "jakk"
Hot hot hot!!
Loved it, please expand... keep "up" the good work :p
i liked it but...
i really liked the story, and i liked the theme, but personally i like a little bit more bacground on who the characters are, etc. this is the first piece of your work i have ready so maybe this comment means nothing, but thanks for writing a panty/incest story as i am partial to a nice pair of panties with a little bit of taboo involved.
another 9 incher say it isn't so
1 point off for each inch above the average 6.
dont listen to mr 6-incher
It's nice to read about characters with big cocks. And its not as uncommon as one would think. All 4 guys I've had had over 6-inch cocks. Also, if women have to read men's stories where nearly every woman has huge tits and is blond petite and athletic, and we don't complain, men should stop complaining about cocks in stories that are supposedly "above average." This is the first story I read that described a girl as being pretty without her being blond/giant-titted. I appreciate that.
Oh Wow!!!
SUCH a hot story! Got me dripping and then some! I can't wait to see where it leads. Please keep up the great work!
so horny now
Thus made me so horny
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