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The Fae's Mate Ch. 01

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by Anonymous02/15/17

not long enough. but a pretty good start all the same...trs

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by pip124702/19/17

Good start

You have me waiting for the next chapters. It's a really good start with a few grammatical errors. Character development is key for me in any story and you have my interest peaked. Look forward to more of your writing.

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