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Was Once Enough?

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/15/17

It never seems to be for women like this one

So with all the kids under 12, who will they live with?
And I assure you both it will not be a clean divorce, no matter how you try to convince me you both want it to have made no impact on your very fragile marriage.
It has i fact ruined it beyond repair.

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by Anonymous02/15/17

Giant cock, yeah, yeah

Jesus, how boring is it possible to be? What made you add this dreariness to the already dreary litany of these awful stories?

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by Anonymous02/15/17

You do know that semen isnt actually STORED in the ball sack?

So they "obviously" werent full of his cum. Yhe rest was just stereotypical bullshit.

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by Anonymous02/15/17

The real question is "Is Once Enough?" That's another story.

Obviously it wasn't, otherwise that last bit would have been unnecessary.

Kiss your domestic harmony goodbye.

Wonder what the cock crazed wife would do if her man decides to go try out some tighter, less stretched out old slut, kind of pussy? Hopefully the author will let us find out.

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by Justgr802/15/17

Terrible

Cliché driven garbage, inexperienced wife wants friends big dick just one time. She gets it and is now a slut, how bad can a story be, it's like the writer took a story and put his name on it......

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by Anonymous02/15/17

typical fall for big dick bullshit.

so if the husband does find out. two big divorce, chris will be strangled by dana after he alerts chris's wife. wife will be distraught pleading for the husband to take her back just like every other lw.

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by Anonymous02/15/17

More garbage posting.

Unfortunately, typical pathetic trash posted in LW.

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by fifteen1602/15/17

Reading

Reading previous comments i do wonder why many bother to read here, they are obviously not into eroticism, perhaps comics from the newsagent would be more suitable.

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by fifteen1602/15/17

Reading

Reading previous comments i wonder why many read here, they are obviously not into eroticism, perhaps comics from the newsagent would be more suitable.

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by Ray Roberts02/15/17

More Please

Always a sucker for this type of story and it lived up to my expectations. The answer to the author's question is; "definitely once is not enough" more, please.

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by Anonymous02/15/17

i do wonder how she can now stand to have sex with that mediocre little dick husband
what will she do if he has a one off?
but mostly what can she do to compensate him?
nothing

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by 0zed02/15/17

Meh!

Please! Stop writing! Unless the slut wife gets burned!

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by Anonymous02/15/17

It will be a tough call for her

to stay in relationship with her "small" husband. She needs to have the TALK and split the sheets and move on...

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by Impo_6402/15/17

Old, old tale...

Old, old tale: the clueless husband. the cheating wife and mother and the false friend, also a cheater. So this is the one million and one story about the same and almost with the same words. Just a thought: "I know I will have to tell Dana about that night sometime"...Is she willing to risk her marriage, the marriage of lover boy and make her children unhappy? Or will she wait till her husband is in his deathbed to confess, so he can die suffering, like the bithch she is? 1*

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by Anonymous02/15/17

Idiotic pathetic cuck crap!!! MINUS 5*!!!

What a bunch of crap!! Are that your passion!! A slut wife who betrays her husband!!! Is it your passion to live with a wive who likes to be a slut who cheats and betrays your trust!! You have to be an insane idiot!!!

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by Anonymous02/15/17

good story but...

I enjoyed this story, but it find it very off-putting that you gave the husband a girl's name, Dana. Why didn't you just leave it at Dan>

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by ju8streading02/15/17

if once is not enough, she should ask for a divorce

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by Anonymous02/15/17

1*

fag cuck shit.

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by Anonymous02/15/17

re:fifteen16

Yes, they are into eroticism, but very hard to find? Apparently not for you though. 1*

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by Anonymous02/15/17

why judging?

why do you people judge and criticize? this an erotic/fantasy/sex site. If you don't like it, read elsewhere. i don't see anything wrong with it other than it is what it is: smutty. so??? Some of these stories i read and stop reading because it's not my cup of tea. That's also your right. these writers are no here to write what you mandate. grow up.

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by TimmyJamieson02/15/17

OK. I Loved it

How could anyone say "fag, cuck, shit?" Nothing gay, there is no cuck with knowledge, just a seduction and an extra marital affair that was well written.

I thought the restaurant scene was hot and well written and the story over all fun. Yes, it is a cheating wife, duh, that's what Loving Wives section is. There may be fall out later, actually that's a story I'd like to read, too, so I hope you follow up, but it's supposed to be fiction. Job well done. Please write more and more frequently.

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by dyonysos02/15/17

Sorry

This isn't really about a phantasme,this is about cheating and if once is not enough this could very well end up in divorce,ik know stranger things have happen on LW but divorce is what will happen
3 ***

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by Mbgdallas02/15/17

Just another

Cheating wife. The problem is the conscious decision to deceive her husband.

Will lead to a total lack of trust.

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by Anonymous02/15/17

Nothing sexy or erotic about this mess

Just another cheating slut excited by a big cock. This story has been done to death. This version adds nothing to the mix. The writing was neither clever or original. The dialogue was written by a horny teenager. And the suggestion at the end as to whether "Is Once Enough" made James Bond roll over in his grave. Just bad story telling, plain and simple.

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by Anonymous02/15/17

re: why judging?

And yet, here you are, judging them.

They are posting their opinions on the story. That is the essence of commentary. By your "logic" only comments praising a story would be allowed.

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by cyferx02/15/17

Not a cuck story

This is just a cheating story in the end and all the cuck stuff is just superfluous. I like a story to be more parsimonious. The cuckold parts really had nothing to do with why she was cheating the whole story could have been about her and Chris and started at the dinner. None of the cuck stuff made any difference from that point on. She says she knows she has to tell Dana, but why? People don't normally tell their spouse when they have cheated, why here? Because he wanted her to cuck him, maybe? Maybe he did, but he didn't want her to cheat on him and that is what she did, so the same rules apply, don't tell. I don't like cheating stories, so if you left out the cuck stuff, I would have passed it over and you wouldn't be getting a 2*.

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by DrKenStone02/15/17

Yuck

Cheater,,,bad

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by Anonymous02/16/17

Excellent!

Very erotic and well-told. FYI, one anon is making multiple insulting comments, together with his buddy impo. Check any new LW story and you see their handiwork. Delete their comments and keep writing.

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by Anonymous02/16/17

Men can be sluts, but most shouldn't think they know how a female slut thinks.

This was focused on sex and orgasms, and cock size. That's what men focus on, very inexperienced and low intelligence men. Most women are smarter than that. A guy finds $20 and goes to buy himself a pack of cigarettes, or a drink. A woman finds $20 bucks and uses it to improve her appearance, then goes to a bar and gets all the drinks, cigarettes, and most anything else she wants, including money to finance the next night out.

Not saying women don't crave and enjoy sex, they are just way smarter about getting it, and much way smarter about getting "paid" for it. Because they learn at a very early age, you don't give away what you can sell, and you don't sell quantity for cheap when you can sell quality for a lot more, like a life time of care and support.

So this was a nice fantasy for someone who knows a whole lot about what men want, and almost nothing about what women want, and can easily get. Don't feel bad, you have the same mentality as about 80% of the writers in the LW category. And the majority always know what is best, right? Guess what percentage of LW stories score 4.5 or above. It ain't 80%.

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by Anonymous02/16/17

Not my cup of tea, cheating for a hudge cock, from a so called friend

Cheater makes husband a chuck, now you know she needs another affair. But this story is over . De62

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by sirhugs02/16/17

Hot beginning

but doing Chris without Dana knowing, or even better, watching, turned me off.

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by Twentyseven02/16/17

Straightforward

There is nothing difficult about this. It is a choice between instant gratification and long term happiness. She chose the former. Suck it up.

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by Anonymous02/16/17

grow up

if you don't like the story move on. I thought it was a really good story nice to hear the womens side for a change need some help with grammer or just proof read before posting thanks and keep writing

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by Anonymous02/16/17

So many crybaby divorcees in these comments

Haha there is nothing funnier than reading the comments under LW stories. So many butthurt guys living out their inability to come to terms with failed relationships, and figuring its the job of the author to do it for them. Then again, if they were more self aware maybe their wives would not have left them in the first place?

Good story, enjoyed it.

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by Anonymous02/16/17

? or !

She provided the answer to her own question with her choice of punctation marks.
!-would indicate YES
ONCE WAS ENOUGH!
?-clearly indicates NO

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by Anonymous02/16/17

comments on comments

Am glad husband was named Dana instead of Dan being as Daniel is my name and I would not act as husband. Dana being non-gender specific allows reader to recognize husband's submissive tendency.
Husband introduced idea of watching another man have sex with wife. Husband encouraged/allowed Chris to often stay with them for days and never objected to Chris' increasingly sexual remarks. Husband is one who seemed almost fixated on lover's penis size and made sure wife was more than aware of huge appendage.
Footsie at dinner-especially the twirling of sock but even without would have been impossible not to notice. Have been in situation where the foot of a colleague's wife found its' way to my crotch. Her slumped down posture and movement of leg did not go unobserved by all at our table. Her reaction to my toes wiggling against her panties led to some shocked looks but all were entranced. Point being husband knew what was going on and as evidenced on return home was aroused and aware of wife being turned on. Then husband takes off???
While not my fantasy it was her husband's and he wanted wife toscrew Chris. At some point, the night would be repeated but husband would ''go to bed early'' leaving wife and lover alone. Then when he was sure they were screwing he would have found way to observe, and when they rested between couplings he would make presence known and encourage them to continue in front of him. Would then repeat scene on every visit

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