by oldfogey
I loved your intro comments. Reading the howls of indignation from offended nit-pickers was almost as good as the story!
Great idea to introduce the concept of incest into your story of Rose and Earl. It should allow for more story lines. Rose is a woman after my own heart and I wish them continued enjoyment. One comment though, parts one and two are the same as the other two stories about how it all began. I assume that these are the continuation of the original. Or did you decide to go another way?