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Magical story and writing style
I do so look forward to reading new chapters of this story, a fine blend of erotism, sex and romance, please continue to release them for a long time.
I am not British although I am living in Eire and travel to the UK regularly and can relate to the detail in your stories. The best of the genre that I have read and I am now about to start reading the whole series again from the beginning.
DEE
Nice style, and hot sex
Really enjoyed what I have read so far, good story, nice style, and hot sex.
Alex
Slap up serving
I guess she got what she deserved. Spankin good chapter
Wow
I looked at this part first before I saw it was chapter 44 but it is so good that I am now starting to read from the beginning.
What a change to have a good story set in the UK with plausible plot and well fashion characters. I reads just like a TV soap.
can't wait to see Maggie capitulating... been waiting for years... literally
Great Episode
Love this story have followed in from the start in 2012 and have watched the development of the characters. The underlying humour in this chapter is terrific.
Melissa B
Finally caught up
Just read all 44 chapters (for the first time) over the last few days.
Thank you for a wonderful entertaining story and i look forward to future chapters.
As a Devonian, i've been to most of the places mentioned and indeed worked for a few years in a garden centre. Didn't have nearly as much fun though!
Cheers, 5 stars.
#dontdropgill
Great writing
My partner Vixen told me what a great writer you are and persuaded me to read the entire story from chapter one. She is right it is a great piece of work, I am surprised that you have not reworked the incest elements so that it could be published as a series of eBooks it is far better than many I have read.
Vix met you a few years ago and told me that you are a television and film scriptwriter, that certainly comes over in your style.
Keep writing the ex-pat boys and girls over in the Balearics love your stuff.
Fred
What a fantastic story!!!!!!
Have finally finish all 44 published chapters and now waiting for more...
Totally absorbing mix of erotica and romance as one of the other commenters wrote probably the best ever coming of age and family relationships stories I have ever read.
Hoping there will be much much more in the future.
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