All Comments on 'On the Loveseat Ch. 01'

She took such good care of her baby boy. There's nothing better than a mother eating her son's cum.

A very erotic story.

Well written and nicely paced.

I cannot wait for the next chapter.

On of the best one page stories ever. So many possibilities to continue.

Keep up the great work.

Nicely paced, wonderful balance of humour and dark secret eroticism. Read it at work and it got my nipples so hard I was worried my boss would notice.

The story was exquisite. Very well paced and very erotic. I think I will print it and leave it somewhere that mother will find it.

Love the sense of humor mixed with eroticism. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great story, you covered all the bases, hurry with the next chapter, need to tell us what the mom was thinking when she grabbed the cock and realized that it was so much longer and thicker than the dad, (her husband), and knew it would knock her up when he enters her love canal, and for the first time in her life her cervix will get bruised, and she will know she will have her son's baby !!! I gave you a 5, good writing and hurry with the next segment !!!! Also tell how good the mom looks !!!!

Very good read. Looking forward to more.

This was hot and a nice start. Would be cool if somehow things progress and things escalate such as having sex in the same room as the unsuspecting father.

Great story.hope to see more from you.

Thanx for the comments everyone! Next chapter has been submitted.

The story was good, blending eroticism and humor, with a nice payoff at the end of this initial chapter. I look forward to future episodes, with some, maybe many keeping the Friday Night Movie setup.

A nice story of a mother showing her son some forbidden love. I hope in the next story the son helps his mother enjoy things as well by rubbing his mothers pussy or ass or breasts. Perhaps mommy will slip into the shower with her boy as she strokes his cock her son's eyes can feast upon the wonder of his mothers forbidden flesh and his hands can fondle and Caress every inch of her body until he shoots his seed and it splashes on mommy's wet skin. I agree with an earlier comment I hope this this son gets to mount his mothers unprotected womb and rutt until he breeds his own dear sweet mother. I loved this short story enough to read it twice.

loved it.all moms should be that handy for their son

this is really good i hope you write more of this!

Loved the story. I look forward to the next chapter

Reall bloody good. Loved it. Great work I enjoyed everysingle bit an going to continue with the next chapter.

I really started to like it but the way you write puts me off. (Lol)

Your jokes could have been better too, I like your style though so try to improve on it!

To a tale with so much potential.

Looking forward to reading the next ones!

This was great!

Loved it!! Wish I had a relationship with my mom!

Love it, can't wait to read more

beautiful