by AnonymousPerv
Perhaps this would have been better filed in/under the "Fetish" category?
-Rei
The characters were 2 dimensional, and there wasn't much to the story at all. Didn't get a hint of arousal personally while reading this. Definitely not hot. Actually boring and very predictable. To the writer. Keep writing as the more you write the better you will get if you use your imagination. Good luck! (professional writer for over 20 years scientific -- just the facts and stats).