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Funny. Kay hasn't been his wife for some months now.
The woman he thought he was fucking was really fucking Stan in her mind, now she's fucking him for real. Time to take his 5 and a half inches and go looking for woman with some brains, and integrity.
The only remaining question, will he let Stan get away with it?
why bother talking to her, just divorce her and get on with life
1* and my very experienced swinger wife once told me, the only thing real large cocks do for me is to hurt me, she really enjoyed my almost 8 inch one fine, only tried one 15 incher one time
?
If this is a cuck/whore fantasy I give it a 3. If not, a 2.
TOO MANY QUESTIONS AND CHOICES
now its time for mind trips to be put to rest, TK U MLJ LV NV
The answers are
No, Yes, No.
divorce
Two choices
Divorce or stop writing
When Cock measurements are in the 1st paragraph
There's no reason to read any further , it's going to be a stupid " huge cock " story . That's my clue to just back out of the story .
And?
You boxed her things up and put them in the garage,
Put her stuff in garbage bags.
Gave all her things to a charity or threw the away,
Did all the banking and left her penniless,
Started the divorce via phone,
Had her friend beat to a pulp
Divorced her skank ass and never spoke to her or her family again.
Let everyone know she is a cheater
OR
Got excited about her cheating and welcomed her with open arms and stop writting and just go bowling.
This story is pretty funny
The author made a good attempt at farce. Not easy to do.
1*
another cocksucker faggot posting cuck SHIT in LW.
liked the timeline thing
That was a good touch. The only good touch though
Another SHIT day in loving wives
Please take your fantasy somewhere else. Oh, wait carolinadreamer will be along shortly to tell you how fantastic your story is. You'll even get some pointers how to improve your trash. Smut by the numbers.
Concurred the reserved little Kay?
Most guys are looking for more than a 36C? She will have sex and blow him any time, but he's bored? Paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences? Just wondering what the hell? Very dismal effort. To much size crap to get through the first page.
re: the story is pretty funny
Yeah, real funny, I'm laughing all the way out the door.
Editing
Needs it. Wrong words and poor grammar detracted from the story.
His message
01H30: No need to come back. Have a good life with lover boy.
Let's do the math
Circumference of Larry's pee pee: 2.75"
Circumference = pi x diameter
2.75 = 3.14 x diameter
diameter = 2.75"/3.14
diameter of Larry's pee pee = ~.88"
I guess one could call Larry "Needle dick the bug fucker."
yawn
yawn yawn yawn
wow
what an idiot, i wonder does your mommy have to turn on your commuter for you.
Lord
Once again the anons are outdoing themselves with the comments. I wonder why they spend so much time reading this kind of story if they don't like them. Truth is they're fascinated by the concept but are too afraid to try it themselves.
@author: lots of mistakes in this story. Sentences that don't make any sense, mispellings etc. 3*
Lord
gordo12 is at it again. Bitching his fucking head off, like always. Lord, what a dick head, moaning, moaning, moaning. You don't know shit about people, so don't even try to analyze them. Look at yourself first and ask yourself, why do I bitch so much about other readers. Jealous of the attention?
No comment on story. Not going to read it. Comments said it all. I'm so glad the anons at least tell the truth, unlike some of the idiots who bitch here with an agenda.
re: let's do the math
no wonder this guy can't keep his slut happy, maybe he should ask gordo12 for help
Truth?
gordo12 you wouldn't know "truth" if it hit you in the ass. This is the fucker who gave a good erotic story a 1* rating the other day because he didn't think it was in the right category. Well stupid, take another look at that story and see what others thought of you.
Women
Their either liars or sluts or both. Another size queen. Dump the bitch.
Pure garbage
No end in sight of the cuck wimp writers on Lit..... This was beyond bad......
Unfinished drivel.
Why won't he sleep tonight? Get some rest and conclude his business. Nothing to go home to. The blowjob signaled the end of their marriage and the beginning of his soon to be ex-wife's life as a big cock slut. It was nice of her to send the photos. The only thing he should do before going to sleep is forward the pictures to all her family and friends to let them know the reason they'll be getting the divorce. Silly, unfinished story not worth the time spent to read it.
1 star
fag
# 1
BTB....!
Just... BTB........!
"I wonder why they spend so much time reading this kind of story if they don't like them."
The only -- ONLY -- way that statement makes any sense is if you are stating that we can know what is in "this kind of story" before reading it, that is is devoid of any thought or worth. It renders your defense of the story not only questionable but down right stupid.
BTW, if this is all there is, it isn't much. If there is more, where was a chapter number to warn it wasn't complete?
Great story!
You could feel the tension growing along with his total helplessness to alter the course of events. I'd love to hear part 2...will she be a regular stop in his trips?
Just one nit: in California you'd be 2 hours *behind* the Midwest, so by the time he was reading her texts at 3am his time, it would have been 5am her time and she'd probably already been split, seeded multiple times and full of his little swimmers on a mission! Btw, I live on the west coast and have often been defeated by time-zone math! I think you had the math correct on the texts exchanged as she was getting ready to go out.
Sorry to go on, but I did like the story and hope you'll continue it....
I agree
Like was already said forward the pictures to her family and your plus your friends. Then they will know why you threw the bitch out!
I think it is time to rid yourself of one selfish bitch
Yep, I think it is time to divorce her before going any farther. You need to be able to trust her-now you can't at all. Sorry but the pics she sent you should be forwarded to her pastor, family, and friends to show them all just what a coniving cunt she is. Also to your buddy Richard. And then make sure he gets fired as well. Since he knew of this whole thing. Fuck friends like him.
I can never understand the mentality
of the dumb moronic sluts who send their husband the very thing he needs in the divorce, lots of lovely incriminating pictures.
What is she18 years old
Is she married or not? What kind of BS on her part asking what she should do. Hope she had fun before her divorce. Absolutely BTB.
No comments...
No comments...just 1*
Simple
Married, getting old, no kids, selfish, crazy cheating wife, why bother? who needs this shit? : Dump her quickly and move on.
Finish it
DIVORSE
Is this brain dead or what?
Should I fly home in the morning? What for cows out of the barn already.
Did they sleep together? What the fuck does that matter at this point.
Is Kay still my wife? She always needs a shithead to pay her bills, and here your check.
Maybe the cheating that ruined the first marriage was her not him. Maybe she has been doing this all along. Also she planed on fucking around, A few days to line up the guys. 3 days to find and buy the dress, 2 days to find the underwear. No this was not a spear of the moment it planned well ahead of the event.
thanks for the effort
to entertain. I hope someone is entertained.
Don't Hurry Back
Let Richard fly home alone to bear the bad news to the two women. Tell him in airport security line after he has already checked in and you changed your reservation. Stay in California until Monday (at a different hotel) and then seek a good divorce attorney when you get back. Keep your cell phone off.
DUH
Story not worth a .
Another person just looking to get killed...
Both Stan and the whore would expect husband to just take a baseball to them, WHICH IS WHY PEOPLE DON'T DO THIS SHIT! Seriously, think about you fucking CHILD. Scan Google for the last year, heck for the last 10 years... NOT ONE STORY LIKE THIS. Only mentally disturbed people are suicidal, only mentally disturbed people take the person they love and torture them. This woman if she existing in real life would be the type of person who could pick-up their soft cuddle kitten, and stick it in the microwave. Another thing that doesn't happen except in the rare 1 in 1 million case of a lunatic. Seriously LP1957 have some self pride.
Wifey knows better than to pull that kind of crap...
...Stan certainly should be clear on the risks of playing with a married woman. My God, are these people all freakin' 16 years old?
If hubby knows what's good for him, he'll hightail it home and straighten out Stan with a couple of good clips to the shnoz. Wifey needs a good spanking at the very least. If they've spent the night and she's "tested him out", she's gotta go. And that friend is no friend. She set it up. She needs gangfucked.
Love or not, a betrayal like this is an invitation to lose the "love of her life".... or maybe not....maybe she doesn't care anymore and the thrill of screwing about while hubby is away, will become the new normal. Maybe hubby is a sicko and gets off on that crap. If he's going to maintain any self respect, he's got to see that if they stay together, he's entirely entitled to take a mistress or fool around at his discretion. What's good for the gander, surely is good for the goose....if not the marriage.
Either way, it's headed for the toilet, or very nearly so.
Who can tell? It's your story, doctor. Where will you take it?
Pretty well written, if a bit trite.
stone cold
Leave a voice message to wife , PACK YOUR SHIT AND DONT BE THERE WHEN I GET BACK.
Get back into town and clean out all the money. Leave nothing. Do not go home. Let Her realize by herself how she screwed up. Don't file for divorce. Just leave.
Stupid Ass
Trying to Call her after the Fact. I would go back to the Hotel Pack and Catch the Next Flight Home. Get everything together. Then when she call's tell her to tell Stan to Take Care because when I see him he could be Missing a Few Inches.
Just a simple reply to wifey:
Don't worry, i'll have my lawyer contact yours when you are back.
Lots of comments
Well is seems a sequel is needed to find what happened in the ladies loo and our hero to make the biggest decision of his life, is his wife toast !
Nice!
Love the text build up.
What a cunt divorce her she sent pics without even speaking to u and never owed her being a valentine whore while your away. No reason being married to a unfaithful slut and her friend is fucking him also just lying about it
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