All Comments on 'Cleaning Attic'

Well, it seems so real. Nice found footage kind for an erotica

Please learn English prior to attempting to write stories with it. Unreadable.

whether it satifys one is debatable. TK U MLJ LV NV

To the Anonymous idiot who made the comment about learning to write in English. Did you bother to check the writers Bio page? If you had AND if you understand what you read, you'd have seen the writer was from India. My bet is, you can't do nearly as well in her native language--so how about cutting her some slack. Her story is entirely readable if not perfect grammar.

Naseha, This is the first time I've read a story in this category. While it's not really my cup of tea, I was impressed with your story line, the diary found in the attic, enough so I'm thinking about adapting it to a Loving Wives story.

Thanks for the read! cd