by hisbelovedroisin
first chapter had me concerned. This is an big big improvement and I'm actually interested and excited for me.
You do a 180 degree turn from the original story? Do I detect a bit of condescension in your tone? Not good.
1 star
great story cant wait for next chapter I was scared for her in 1st chapter but hope things are looking up for her now please update soon
Again, this is loosely based on actual events. So to the anon that is bashing things, try to keep that in mind. Or, alternatively just don't read it.