by Nanaya
Fucking amazing chapter. Please let Laura not be stupid. Her and Riley belong together.
And Suzanne is a bitch.
This is great! Don't mention the second language thing anymore, it is a non-issue. Keep writing, you are very good!
Am loving this story, and the fact that its long chapters too.. yay! Rylie and Lauren are so sweet, they belong together... Suzanne and Rocco are just obstacles they need to overcome... personally I think theres something going on between Suzanne and Rocco..long before Lauren. Keep up the good work and cant wait for the next installment.
You can really envoke emotion through your writing. I was rooting for Riley to tell her the truth, then I stopped to go get some cookies...then I started reading again anticipating Laura's reply. She really didn't answer him...which left me wanting more and ice cream.
Please continue!
Just wow.....wow. ..saw dis story today....it's so good...can't wait to read more. ...Thanks
Great character development! Thank you very much. Hope there's more, both of this tale and new stories down the line. Stop eating, drinking and sleeping - just keep writing.
all of your stories are amazing & this one is no different. i'm excited to see where this goes. i wish that riley had spoken up sooner.
A great story where Laura and Reilly are as real as you and I. Their relationship is eerily reminiscent of my own with my best friend/lover. Can't wait to see how the story plays out in print and reality.
This has me on the edge of my seat!!! What will she do?! Waiting on the next chapter because this is some good stuff!!!
Romantic stories seldom make me cry, but your work is so beautiful. Laura and Riley tug at my heart strings, and I’m agonised to watch them want each other so badly but pass each other just like ships in the night.
Thank you so much for writing! I hope this story continues.
When are you coming back to finish the story? I've been waiting, please finish thank you. I really enjoy your stories.
I have read all your stories and love you style of writing. Would love to see what happens with Laura and Riley. Hope you will finish if possible.
This story is so good and so truthful. Falling for a friend and entering that type of relationship is hard to deal with because at the core of it your heart is totally affected. I just hope that even though Rocco is fine, she realizes she has a mouth that is rich there. Rocco is controlling, you can tell. And are him and Sue getting it on as we speak? It's crazy that they both use the get up early excuse. If they both wanted the relationship with Laura and Riley then they would've stayed with them. Hmmmm
Please give us an update soon! Riley and Laura HAVE to be together, they are each other's true loves! Give them babies and everything they deserve!!
You are the best writer on this site! We hang off your words! Please give us more! Sorry to be so demanding.
Thank you for a beautiful romance story. You create characters I can see everyday, but you make me see them in a different way. The characters and their shifting relationships make me long for the next part and yet be fearful of the story ending. Thank you!