by JimBob44
Why would a young man of his age give up on life with women? That made no sense and ruined the overall effect of the story. Not your best Jimbob.
Very well done...even if I wasn't fond of the ending...but often that is what life is! Thanks!
What did he 'give up'?
I don't know any decent men who don't cheat. His girlfriend was shacking up with a guy for many months, the dying tranny was better than the slut, and he hooks up with another girl at the end. I didn't see anything wrong with it. Bi-guys are sexy.
It is certainly different from the other two versions, where it started the same, and ended with the GF shagged and the taxi driver.
In the 3 versions he becomes bisex. Only the third version (this one) has that romantic twist, with DOM/sub forced scenario.
It’s interesting how a change in the sequence of appearance of actors may change a story (like happens in real life).