Virtually Swapping Ch. 01

Idiotic!!! MINUS 5*!!!

You imply that she is cheating and betraying the trust of her husband!! If your protagonist goes that way she is only a cheater and a low character!! Want you to be married to a slut like that???

I don't think there's enough of this to rate yet

I hate when someone writes a multi-chapter story and only writes one page! I won't rate this until there's more to rate.

The writing is okay

But what has been a couple of good marriages is about to come apart and the kids will suffer the consequences.... too bad, but some women can't leave well enough alone starting with Eve

2 friends and one asinine idea...

2 friends and one asinine idea...For now just an idea...soon something more and maybe some lives ruined...2* for now

People who come in and trash talk

I hate them

1*

stupid cuck shit.

re @Anonymous "People who come in and trash talk"

You forgot to say you hate everybody, even your own mother! She never could tell you who your father was. That's why all your life consists of hating and whining.

i threw up when

i read this idiot was writing another chapter.

re: people who come in and trash talk

Thank you. Mission accomplished.

what the fuck is this?

1*

not my proudest fap

Fun story

Light hearted, balanced, could go anywhere. Arousal, 6/10, because it could go anywhere, & sex between good friends is a big turn-on for me.