U r truly a great writer--sometimes its tough following all the characters---being its a story--u can do fifth year or 6th year--since a story is by the author--one of the best writers I seen on here
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Anonymous02/18/17
sandys plot has become predictable and lame. im probably going to give this up now. at least gingers kids have essentially removed themselves from the equation. now theres amanda and aaron and an unnecessary pregnancy. f*cking stupid.
i hope your saying that either Amanda or Aaron are Monis kids? aka Tonis niece and nephew ? if not then Monis child needs to be found and explained...
yes, get working on ideas for year 5, the current babies/children will need their stories told...
Matt and Sophies future children?
I have read all of your series. You are very talented but you do need to do more researching to keep the legalities and the stories in check and balance of Real Life vs Fantasyland!
With all that said: FANTASTIC Writings!!!
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U r truly a great writer--sometimes its tough following all the characters---being its a story--u can do fifth year or 6th year--since a story is by the author--one of the best writers I seen on here
sandys plot has become predictable and lame. im probably going to give this up now. at least gingers kids have essentially removed themselves from the equation. now theres amanda and aaron and an unnecessary pregnancy. f*cking stupid.
awesome chapter...
i hope your saying that either Amanda or Aaron are Monis kids? aka Tonis niece and nephew ? if not then Monis child needs to be found and explained...
yes, get working on ideas for year 5, the current babies/children will need their stories told...
Matt and Sophies future children?
Awesome writing!
I have read all of your series. You are very talented but you do need to do more researching to keep the legalities and the stories in check and balance of Real Life vs Fantasyland!
With all that said: FANTASTIC Writings!!!
Fantastic
Love the story! Can not wait for more. Thank you!!
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