White Wife Gets Taken in Her Home

HOT STORY

Thanks for sharing with us.This is a fantasy of my wife and me.

continuity

already established she wasn't wearing panties .. how could then later be taken off?

On a scale of 1 to 10

I'd vote for you not ever writing again. Pure garbage!

Parcheesi

Such is the dream of every white wife. To take panties off that you don't have on is the kind of thing that gets white wives either accused of witchcraft or involved in high stakes games of Parcheesi with Pakistani men who masturbate under the table while farting Three Blind Mice..

One word....

Proof read.

Magic Panties

You lost me as soon as you said her panties were pulled down when you just said she had no panties 2 paragraphs earlier. Proof read or get an editor.

Sorry

Thanks for the effort but this story was poorly written and not very good.

It started out as an interesting story but then you lost me after you said that she had no panties. Then the guys put her on the pool table and removed her skirt and the panties that she was not wearing. You need to proof read your story. I did not read any further, so I have no idea about the rest of it.

close

you got lost in the storyline a little. Maybe take a little more time and not rush.

Proof Read

Not that you haven't already received the comment multiple times, but proof read. Mistakes like the panties error take a reader out of the story. Hook up with one of the editors here before you post. They'll help make your story better.

AWESOME!

That was awesome! The husband was punished and all, there should have been more though. Part two of this please? The wife shouldve let a black guy fck her husband as punishment and divorce him and get beaten as a perv asshole, he deserves it!