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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/19/17

my three valentiens

funny, but a bit rough.
You never introduced the sister. she just appeared, long after there was a suggestion of incest, and that's not foreshadowing.
Could have been much better.

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by Anonymous02/19/17

Confusing

at best.

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by Anonymous02/21/17

Appalling!

Your "writing" doesn't get any better.

Time to give up and stop annoying Lit's readers.

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