All Comments on 'Fantastic Pheromones'

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dominant_maledominant_maleabout 7 years agoAuthor
feedback appreciated

I hope you like this story, any feedback, good and bad is appreciated let me know what you liked and disliked about the story and I'll use the feedback to help shape my future stories.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More ...

Please add more to the story.

Great start and set-up for more chapters.

How does John work to program the women when he's gone?

What other people can they bring into this group?

How might Dave have John help out in other areas of his life - .i.e. job/finances?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Have a feeling about this plot

Dave might just steals them away if there's a next part

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 7 years ago

Loved it. Another chapter would be awesome!!

dominant_maledominant_maleabout 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for leaving the encouragement about this story. It was intended to be a stand alone story, but I think another tale of Dave and his unique pheromones might be on the cards.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it!

Pretty please write a new chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Loved it

Great story, like others have said, more please.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Wonderful tale.

More chapters would be fantastic. Either with John or Dave's other adventures.

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