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Please add more to the story.
Great start and set-up for more chapters.
How does John work to program the women when he's gone?
What other people can they bring into this group?
How might Dave have John help out in other areas of his life - .i.e. job/finances?
Have a feeling about this plot
Dave might just steals them away if there's a next part
Loved it. Another chapter would be awesome!!
Thanks
Thanks for leaving the encouragement about this story. It was intended to be a stand alone story, but I think another tale of Dave and his unique pheromones might be on the cards.
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