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Awakening Pt. 03

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by Dont_miss_me02/19/17

I could stand...

A bit longer story, but what you have is awesome. Just a couple spelling and grammar errors but the syntax and flow of the story was spot on. Gonna have to save this under favorite stories.

Great job, keep them coming...

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by Anonymous02/21/17

Fantastic

I'm loving this series and so eager for more!

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