All Comments on 'Mature Discretion: Brad'

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FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67about 7 years ago
Hot short story! Five from me

Love this... more please.

PrfsrPrfsrabout 7 years ago
Find an editor

Full of errors!

uksnowyuksnowyabout 7 years ago
Mature

It could be vastly improved but I like the subject.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very interesting and spicy.

I think you are going to build something really great. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
English Spoken Goodly Here!

past vs passed

closes vs clothes

then vs than

crouch vs crotch

fuck vs fucked

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Tons of grammatical errors. Plus, there is no such thing as a brotha named "Brad". One star for this piece of junk.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Want Chapter 2

I love shooting a load into a barren womb, but I love White girls knocked up Black babies even better. I would be interested in knowing grandma's thoughts that her White traits will go extinct.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Loved it but needs more description during the fucking eg he rode me from behind for an houretc.Looking forward to chapter 2

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