A Little Lunchtime Relief

Good job

Very hot and fun story. Not sure I understand these guys, but the sex part was very well done.

Ummmm....

Sort of odd, but fun.

Hubba

What's not to understand... they're horny as hell and willig to nail anything. Wonderful story, even for a straight guy!

Hot story!

A fun story with hot sex. Those two horny teens know how to make lunch more fun!

SlutTreatment

You're so nasty with your writing. *purr* -J

Wonderful imagination!!

Hopefully the next time, Joey is dressed fully!!!!

wow!!!!!!!

wow.thats all i could say when i read this.i was speechless.i mean that was the kinkiest most intresting thing i ever read(next to your other story for gay male).and i'm a girl so thank you vey very much.i can sleep better tonight okay?see ya.

Dang!

Great story, Just picked it at random, glad I did. Very hot

yowza

Well done... Nick's changover seemed a bit quick, but the sex was spectacular.

i like the story

i relly liked your stoy it got me relly hard

Wow...

Loved the way those boys talked to each other. Great relationship, GREAT dialogue, and a very hot story, overall.

Wow

One word says it all: great! Keep writing!

CUMM ALL OVER!

MY cock was so hard i had to take the laptop to the bathroom and jerk off myself! Rocks! Over and over again!

me-ow!

SO hott. That story was very sexy and kinky. I loved it. Your writing style is dynamic.

Oh yes, Nick is oh so straight. (My partner said the same thing for years. We were childhood friends too. We've been together 11 years now.)

Chapter 2?

You should make this into chapters. I'd really like to see how things turn out when they go off to college and they meet other people and how Nick would feel if Joey brought another guy home to fuck him in the ass that belongs to Nick. This would be a very good storyline of how Nick comes to realize that he is jealous and in love with Joey. Well yea just my suggestion but this is a very good story.

great

like stories like this- big, strong, handsome jock has a cock-slave_to worship his cock- anytime, anywhere----would do anything to get a taste of that jock cock__after football or soccer practice joey could suck sweaty balls and lick sweaty ass clean.....worship big biceps and pecs and pits--work down those washboard abs--then beg the jock for the chance to worship his cock- ---i would have enjoyed it more if the jock weren't so obviously a cock hungry bitch himself- and definitely wouldn't want the muscle jock to wear panties----i want a man to be dominant and masculine and not a cock-sucking, panty-wearing bitch. i'm all for the cave man that feeds you his cum then leaves you to finish yourself off while he goes to chat up his girl....cock slaves/sluts need to be that---sluts and slaves- not equal sex partners

Great story. Would love to dress up for a guy and have him use my like a woman

LOVE IT!!!!!!!

I love this story! Please continue it.