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I Needed That

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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2206/30/04

Great...

...read. I liked this very much.

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by fawnie06/30/04

lovely hun!

i can relate! very nice job and a very sad subject!
i enjoyed reading this!

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by WickedEve06/30/04

I'm impressed

Great poem. I really mean that!

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by Merrymaker07/01/04

Unwinding in slow motion

or is it unraveling? regardless, I really like the wrap up, especially "My heart slows to the cadence of someone else's world"...well done!
~Merry

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