I like the idea of the wife's and boss' actions as defining a new reality for him. Walking that thin line between sane mind and a fully insane act during the trial was feesh as well. A lot of over the top stories already written but I'm not sure that this perspective has been used much, if at all.
A flash story was a great or idea as well since there was no need for too much back story in order to explain his actions or rather reactions. There might be those who want to know the reason behind her actions but I honestly didn't believe that is necessary at all nor what you intended to show from m the story.
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Anonymous02/20/17
OK...
OK, it was definitely a different take on "burn the bitch." I understand why you ended the story where you did. But, I would've like to hear how the media "burned the bitch" and the other assholes for doing to the husband what they did.
Sometimes there just is not enough punishment. It's good the whore wife will never have sex again and her physical appearance is gone forever. That is payback that just keeps going and going and going. More, more and more!
Did the other assholes in the house get divorced or burned?
Don't get me wrong. I think you finished the story as you wanted and I applaud you for that. But I have a lot of Paul Harvey in me and want to know the rest of the story.
Yeah, you are gonna visit the other assholes when you can and give them the personal payback they deserve, but what was the immediate shit storm that hit them?
Gearheads are people who like cars. Interesting little tale of murder and mayhem. I don’t care for murder porn. Get a divorce. A wise man once said that violence is the last refuge of the incompetent. He was right. Not my kind of tale.
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Anonymous02/20/17
Hahaha ! Loved it
Well its not the very best story ever posted in this category , but it is the best of these last few days .
Added to that , it's going to cause all of the Cuck Apologists heartburn , and by golly we've got us a winner ! Top marks from me.
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Anonymous02/20/17
Weird story
The dr of death. He flipped out. Him finding his wife pulling a train made no sense. Really?
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Anonymous02/20/17
Clearly trying to be funny
But failed. Stupid is not the same thing as funny.
And any of you nut jobs who are jerking off to visions of people burning need to seek professional help.
It wasn't humorous, enlightening, erotic, provocative or even well written. No redeeming virtues at all. 2*
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Anonymous02/20/17
An excellent story, keep them coming.
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Anonymous02/20/17
Different, that's for sure
Really burned the bitch. I don't know if this belongs in humor or horror, surely not in LW, though.
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Anonymous02/20/17
Dumb
Enough said.
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Anonymous02/20/17
A short story
with lots of black humor. I liked it. It's so surreal and stupid that it's funny.
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Anonymous02/20/17
well, his wife and co-workers DID burn him, metaphorically speaking
and you know what happens to people who play with fire
yup, they get burned, and that's what happened to them
not bad. better than 80%-90% of the LW dreck that's been posted the last few years. Too many happy cuck\wannabe cucks flooding the site. this story was a breath of fresh air
Not to mention a true BTB entry.
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Anonymous02/20/17
WORST STORY EVER
Maybe the worst story ever posted here.Where is the minus 5 when you need it.
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Anonymous02/20/17
this is as good
as and better then most of the stupid i shared my wife stories.
IMHO this is an interesting twist on another story. I agree with another poster that it is a little too short. I did enjoy it and hope to see more from you. As to the category, this is the correct one for this story. Thanks again.
cute.
Just proves the point, no good ever comes from someone hitting your car.
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Anonymous02/20/17
Hell Yes
When the term "Burn the Bitch or Bastard" is used, this story brings new meaning to the word burn. Fun read. Reality? Not in a million years. But still fun. Thanks for the laugh today!! 4 stars only for how short it was.
That was a Dark little story ( pun intended ) . I'm pretty sure that the author was using a metaphor , and a very effective one at that !
In my minds eye , I'm gonna transpose this onto just about every Matt Moreau story that I ever read ( I think about 3 or 4 were not too bad ) , and I invite everyone else to do the same thing , lol .
Way to make a splash in LW world no1specific .
P.S. I also like the fact that you listed favorites on your Bio page . That's the only reason I read this story , seeing's how Lit failed to post any story tags !
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Anonymous02/20/17
Another one.
Not one star, I gave it a three, but another meh story that you say, "Well, at least it wasn't disgusting, except the murder and arson part. At least it wasn't a cuckold story." No, but it's not a good story, either. Better than the other story posted today, but better than dog shit still isn't good.
I'm still waiting for something worth reading. I couldn't finish this psycho stuff.
have him build a small nuclear device and plant it in the garage and then remotely detonate it, taking out a small city. That would really make the readers laugh and admire your genius. A nuclear response is not unreasonable if a wife cheats. Collateral damage is acceptable. We demand respect!
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Anonymous02/20/17
Nice
With all the willing cuck wimp stories lately, this was the perfect remedy. It was dark, but better than those fag wimp stories always.... Leave the creampie fag wimp stories to Carolinadreamer, king cuck.....
It is meant to be humorous and under that optic a fun story. Everyone seems
to feel it is a real life confession. I admit I was a bit on the sad side because I could not think what she was going to say to him later!
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Anonymous02/20/17
lol loved it !!!
Refreshing after suffering through most of this gay cuck shit. Thanks
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Anonymous02/20/17
Disgusting
See above
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Anonymous02/20/17
Well that WAS a new take on BTB - literally.
Kinda gruesome ending but whatever. Maybe taking some video and suing everyone would have been an easier route. I wasn't quite sure if everyone besides his wife died? Or if the fire department saved some? I'm thinking some got out and that relates to some of the trips he wants to take when he gets out. Not sure how he's going to have any money to finance those trips, but I'm thinking the crazy guy is going to steal it. Maybe a followup story?
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Anonymous02/20/17
Really bad
The wife as office whore is silly. If the fire was as bad as he described they would have died.
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Anonymous02/20/17
Awesome!
Loved the NAPALM used in this one, a nice difference from most of the cheater stories.
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Anonymous02/20/17
A psychedelic Symphony in Napalm sharp major
The Literotica version of “American Beauty” sticks to the movie’s formula, but also infuses the conventions of the genre with a breezy insouciance that scrubs away some of the material’s bland gloss.
He meant to burn her and he did. Now thats what I call temporary insanity and lets have a chat after you get out and from under your whoring ways. Nice to see the wife can't walk anymore and lost all her feminine charms. Now thats payback.
Laughed my way thru this tale, nice job on a new twist (haven't seen napalm used here - although it's bloody easy to make - 3 simple ingredients bought almost anywhere).
Would have been nice to at least allude to the actual body count (if any) in the tale itself, don't think it warrants a sequel though.
4/5 for entertainment value
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Anonymous02/20/17
Where
was the "new twist"?
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Anonymous02/20/17
Hahaha
I love it because all the cucky, wimps, and slutwife lovers are going to go 'ballistic'.
English
Wow!
Not what I expected at all. It was a fun read.
Wrong Post
With all due respect, this is not an erotic story. (But you probably know that.)
HaHa!
He burned the bitch! REALLY!
5*
Hope he gets em all!
Hahaha!
4* for a dark but humorous angle.
it is in the right place. a cheating wife story belongs here.
he seen what was going on and flipped his wiggy, dam.
good story but a bit short.
hello
well a deadly one but interesting
weird, but entertaining
structurally sound, disturbing, weird, but entertaining
COBAL?
If you’re want to show off your computer knowledge, you should know that it is COBOL (COmmon Business-Oriented Language), not COBAL!
I like the idea of the wife's and boss' actions as defining a new reality for him. Walking that thin line between sane mind and a fully insane act during the trial was feesh as well. A lot of over the top stories already written but I'm not sure that this perspective has been used much, if at all.
A flash story was a great or idea as well since there was no need for too much back story in order to explain his actions or rather reactions. There might be those who want to know the reason behind her actions but I honestly didn't believe that is necessary at all nor what you intended to show from m the story.
OK...
OK, it was definitely a different take on "burn the bitch." I understand why you ended the story where you did. But, I would've like to hear how the media "burned the bitch" and the other assholes for doing to the husband what they did.
Sometimes there just is not enough punishment. It's good the whore wife will never have sex again and her physical appearance is gone forever. That is payback that just keeps going and going and going. More, more and more!
Did the other assholes in the house get divorced or burned?
Don't get me wrong. I think you finished the story as you wanted and I applaud you for that. But I have a lot of Paul Harvey in me and want to know the rest of the story.
Yeah, you are gonna visit the other assholes when you can and give them the personal payback they deserve, but what was the immediate shit storm that hit them?
Dr. Mengele is my therapist, too.
Coincidence?
Motorhead is the name of a band
Gearheads are people who like cars. Interesting little tale of murder and mayhem. I don’t care for murder porn. Get a divorce. A wise man once said that violence is the last refuge of the incompetent. He was right. Not my kind of tale.
Hahaha ! Loved it
Well its not the very best story ever posted in this category , but it is the best of these last few days .
Added to that , it's going to cause all of the Cuck Apologists heartburn , and by golly we've got us a winner ! Top marks from me.
Weird story
The dr of death. He flipped out. Him finding his wife pulling a train made no sense. Really?
Clearly trying to be funny
But failed. Stupid is not the same thing as funny.
And any of you nut jobs who are jerking off to visions of people burning need to seek professional help.
Yuchhh
It wasn't humorous, enlightening, erotic, provocative or even well written. No redeeming virtues at all. 2*
An excellent story, keep them coming.
Different, that's for sure
Really burned the bitch. I don't know if this belongs in humor or horror, surely not in LW, though.
Dumb
Enough said.
A short story
with lots of black humor. I liked it. It's so surreal and stupid that it's funny.
well, his wife and co-workers DID burn him, metaphorically speaking
and you know what happens to people who play with fire
yup, they get burned, and that's what happened to them
not bad. better than 80%-90% of the LW dreck that's been posted the last few years. Too many happy cuck\wannabe cucks flooding the site. this story was a breath of fresh air
Not to mention a true BTB entry.
WORST STORY EVER
Maybe the worst story ever posted here.Where is the minus 5 when you need it.
this is as good
as and better then most of the stupid i shared my wife stories.
IMHO this is an interesting twist on another story. I agree with another poster that it is a little too short. I did enjoy it and hope to see more from you. As to the category, this is the correct one for this story. Thanks again.
Funny
I liked it.
5* A Brand New Take on Burning the Bitch
The dark humor kept me chuckling. Well Done!!!
brhd
cute.
Just proves the point, no good ever comes from someone hitting your car.
Hell Yes
When the term "Burn the Bitch or Bastard" is used, this story brings new meaning to the word burn. Fun read. Reality? Not in a million years. But still fun. Thanks for the laugh today!! 4 stars only for how short it was.
What About the Others in the House?
None of them, but Phil, died?
LOL different 4*
That's a dark load you're carrying in that brain buddy!
WOW!
I'm worried about the mentality that likes this story. With that said, you did a fairly good job of writing a really off-beat story.
Crispy critters
Perfect story for the Daily Mail, literally BTB. A
It was a fun read?
You're kidding right? About the same level as the willing cuckold crap.
Wowser
That was a Dark little story ( pun intended ) . I'm pretty sure that the author was using a metaphor , and a very effective one at that !
In my minds eye , I'm gonna transpose this onto just about every Matt Moreau story that I ever read ( I think about 3 or 4 were not too bad ) , and I invite everyone else to do the same thing , lol .
Way to make a splash in LW world no1specific .
P.S. I also like the fact that you listed favorites on your Bio page . That's the only reason I read this story , seeing's how Lit failed to post any story tags !
Another one.
Not one star, I gave it a three, but another meh story that you say, "Well, at least it wasn't disgusting, except the murder and arson part. At least it wasn't a cuckold story." No, but it's not a good story, either. Better than the other story posted today, but better than dog shit still isn't good.
I'm still waiting for something worth reading. I couldn't finish this psycho stuff.
Next time, make your hero a physicist and
have him build a small nuclear device and plant it in the garage and then remotely detonate it, taking out a small city. That would really make the readers laugh and admire your genius. A nuclear response is not unreasonable if a wife cheats. Collateral damage is acceptable. We demand respect!
Nice
With all the willing cuck wimp stories lately, this was the perfect remedy. It was dark, but better than those fag wimp stories always.... Leave the creampie fag wimp stories to Carolinadreamer, king cuck.....
Wrong category
Perhaps Satire ... or Mind Controlless?
unrated, but wouldn't think above 2, no matter what category!
Of course it is not real life, gang!
It is meant to be humorous and under that optic a fun story. Everyone seems
to feel it is a real life confession. I admit I was a bit on the sad side because I could not think what she was going to say to him later!
lol loved it !!!
Refreshing after suffering through most of this gay cuck shit. Thanks
Disgusting
See above
Well that WAS a new take on BTB - literally.
Kinda gruesome ending but whatever. Maybe taking some video and suing everyone would have been an easier route. I wasn't quite sure if everyone besides his wife died? Or if the fire department saved some? I'm thinking some got out and that relates to some of the trips he wants to take when he gets out. Not sure how he's going to have any money to finance those trips, but I'm thinking the crazy guy is going to steal it. Maybe a followup story?
Really bad
The wife as office whore is silly. If the fire was as bad as he described they would have died.
Awesome!
Loved the NAPALM used in this one, a nice difference from most of the cheater stories.
A psychedelic Symphony in Napalm sharp major
The Literotica version of “American Beauty” sticks to the movie’s formula, but also infuses the conventions of the genre with a breezy insouciance that scrubs away some of the material’s bland gloss.
Five Gallons thumbs up !
A true BTB Story
He meant to burn her and he did. Now thats what I call temporary insanity and lets have a chat after you get out and from under your whoring ways. Nice to see the wife can't walk anymore and lost all her feminine charms. Now thats payback.
Truly a flaming sidedish of vengence
Laughed my way thru this tale, nice job on a new twist (haven't seen napalm used here - although it's bloody easy to make - 3 simple ingredients bought almost anywhere).
Would have been nice to at least allude to the actual body count (if any) in the tale itself, don't think it warrants a sequel though.
4/5 for entertainment value
Where
was the "new twist"?
Hahaha
I love it because all the cucky, wimps, and slutwife lovers are going to go 'ballistic'.
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