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Pay Back is Enjoyable
Damn, I really love a good romance story that ends well.
LOL
Harddaysknight, that was a funny comment. Blow up half the town? Priceless.
If this author wanted to jerk some chains, he succeeded.
Loved it
I laughed my ass off. Great job!!
Not an easy story...
Not an easy story...black humor isn't for everyone. Humor differs from person to person...Example: Benny Hill. 50% of the persons thought he was very funny, the other 50% wouldn't even smile...3* for this one
Oh Yeah
What a wonderful, light feel-good tale. Actually describing the wife in court made my day. We need more tales like this. Considering what's been coming out lately this is a reason for me to visit this site more than I have been.
FIVE BRIGHT STARS
ps Don't fuck with my paisans
Fun Story
Fun story, a nice change from the usual fair of "I fucked another man, but I really love you, you really love me too, so will forgive me and forget about what I did and we can both pretend that we know what the word "love" means."
What is also fun are all the weird comments about this story.
"So, how do you like your cheatin' wives"
"Extra crispy please"
There was a wife once
She went to visit her boyfriend who lived in a trailer house. One of those with gas bottles in front? Great big ones, too. Those fittings should be checked, it seems they can leak.
Dangerous, causes fires big explosions and the little trailers have just one door.. I remember that, it made the papers. the fake cowboy didn't get out.
That wife didn't either. neither did the Mother and HER boyfriend, that was a surprise.
Too bad, sounded like one hell of a party since all four were found in the one back bed.
Cops sure ask a lot of questions when this happens, but tough to tell anything when there is that much damage..
Pretty sure
That betrayedbylove is mentally ill.
The story was different so the author achieved his goal.
3*
Very good story
Very good story. It would have been great only if the husband got away with it. Temporary insanity is a valid defense. Too bad I could not be on the jury I would have pushed for a not guilty charge. Oh, look at the charges he plea bargained to, obviously no one died as murder was not on the table. With overcrowding, time off for good behavior and the hard work of those who push for leniency for criminals the husband would most likely be looking at two to three years, or less. I would hope any followup story would reflect this plus the husband's prison gained education being of great help in any future revenge plans.
Thanks
This story worked really well.
And it was funny in a blackened sort of way. Well, home made napalm will do that...
Sigh
For all the adolescents out there.
DUH
A true BTB story. A BIG FIVE.
Four
Four stars. Dark humor for sure. How he snapped into a "new rules" reality was brilliant.
@anonymous, "Another one."
"I'm still waiting for something worth reading." Keep waiting. It's coming. Be sure to log on St. Patrick's day. You won't want to miss it. Mark your calendar. Something readers have been asking for a long time is coming. Maybe the best day ever in LW. It's going to be a very big day. Just a little patience.
This was tongue in cheek? I can't tell. If it's a joke, okay. If it's meant to be taken seriously, not okay.
Not new
Another author burned up his home while the wife was entertaining others with her twat. Lit the fire with an arrow if I'm not mistaken. Got the cheaters on the news when they ran out the house.
Yet I found your dark tale quirky enough to keep reading. And I look forward to more takes on old roads well traveled in LW.
Re: "If it's meant to be taken seriously, not okay." Randi comment
Are any Literotica stories intended to be taken seriously? They are, after all, intended to be erotic rather than erudite.
This one perhaps even less serious than most others, unless you consider a spoof on the 'Burn The Bitch' genre to be a serious concept.
It's unfortunate that No1Specific hasn't yet joined the commentary conversation, as he might Specifically clarify a few points other commenters have brought up. But from his Biog note and from those he lists as his favourite authors, I suspect spoof.
Lue
But I thought revenge was a dish best served cold!
Hey no1specific, there's a Mr. Tarantino on the phone for you.
Any of you want to make casting suggestions? Talk about low hanging fruit!
Not What I learned in Chemistry
I have to admit the author had a different chemistry curriculum than I did, We never learned the basics of napalm in either high school or college. Drat.
WOW! A big Thank You to everyone
I am truly a a amazed that people even read my story, much less took the time to comment on it. Thank you all. It is all about the stress. When what you are.... when how you define your world goes left..... what do you do? Batman is a few fries short of a happy meal and the Joker does make some cognisent points. Any way sometimes a handgrenade in the Koi pond is good for the soul.
Wow! Extreme!
The Worm turns! Not necessarily to the extent in the story; but it should serve as a warning, to anyone in a relationship, who think they can do, whatever they wish! Well written my friend!
Nice bit of humor
The writing style didn't really sell me on the madness, but as a bit of dark parody, it's quite good.
Just a view reviews that are worthy of a chuckle
"Damn, I really love a good story that ends well"
"And it was funny in a blackened sort of way. Well, homemade napalm will do that........"
"He burned the bitch. Really?"
"Just proves the point, no good ever comes from someone hitting your car."
"He meant to burn her, and he did"
"Collateral damage is acceptable. We deserve respect."
It's great that so many have a sense of humor. Like I always claimed, the comments can make your day. Thanks for an entertaining review. (signed ML)
Sick story
Reveling in this type of stuff is just wrong!
Even though your story is over the normal fundamental norm its nice to read!!!
Keep on writing your story is funny and entertaining!!!
@ML...
How did you miss "A psychedelic Symphony in Napalm sharp major"??!!
I literally laughed out loud over that one (and then he added "5 Galons thumbs up"! as the cherry on top).
Ah me. Yes 'good-quality' dark humor can be a difficult chore, but the author (and several commentators, as noted) did quite well here.
Those of you with concerns for our collective mentalities may want to make note that the author did not actually share ('hinting about' and 'sharing' are not the same thing) the recipe for the napalm with us here - and take a clue from that. This was merely an exercise in letting a little pressure vent off of the mental "dark energy" tank a bit via vicarious and generally harmless means here. Those commentators with non-wife-sharing mentalities have needed to grind their teeth rather much around here lately, so consider this story a public service to that audience.
@no1specific (on you comment)
I think you were looking for the word 'cogent' there. right?
Yes... Just a Harmless Stress Relief
Yup, nothing dark and evil here. Just a little literature stress relief. Uh-HUH! Doncha know.
I did misspell a word in my last reply... cognizant - knowledgeable of something especially through personal experience. I was of course referring to the "Joker" of the "Suicide Squad" series.... not the baffoon from the TV show. And what about that "Harley Quinn"? Now THERE'S a woman!
Tootles
Good one! *****
Got my quota of laughs for the day!
Great read
Burn ya cucky sickos
Nice!
Lmao! Thanks
25 years in prison
Over a dirty gutter slut⁉️😕😕 not on your life.. Whore wasn't worth it.. Hated the story.
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