All Comments on 'Yard Boys'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good story, but seemed to be somewhat rushed.

Seemed as though you were in such a hurry to get to the sex, that you skipped the buildup, which made it feel more like a stereotypical porno clip.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Welcome to Literotica

You made a great debut with a super hot tale.

Now give us more, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Needs work

NO -someone said prono clip -have to agree. Slam - Bam -no thank you Ma'am

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterabout 7 years ago
Great story!

Short but sweet, and very very hot! Just long enough to spill some cum of your own while reading.

Horny CoupleHorny Coupleover 3 years ago

My wife and I really got horny reading this story. Thanks

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