by Kareem_E_Goodness
Short but sweet..............straight to the point, not bad for a first time. I would read more.....
You almost made me Kareem (er, I meant cream) my jeans!! Keep it up!
Not a bad start, but how does the librarian feel? We don't know a thing about this lady. What is she thinking about while being raped? I for one would like more information. Keep writing, its lots of fun when you know you're getting better. You've got a good beginning.