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by fawnie06/30/04

very nice..

this form is not so easy, you did it nicely, wonderful flow.
sweet poetry!

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by tarablackwood2206/30/04

Lovely....

....form poetry of this quality makes me shiver! I simply can not do it, and I read in amazement!

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by annaswirls06/30/04

layaway space travel

"My trip to the moon; its been postponed." this is a line that will stay with me. The rest is beautiful too. Thanks Cordelia.

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