All Comments on 'Barbie + Ken Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More

More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
amazing

please continue! this is in the top 1% of submissions here quality wise. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Yes, yes, more! Can't wait for the next installment. More PLEASE!

geemeedeegeemeedeealmost 6 years ago

THIS IS AMAZING ALREADY.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Mind the consent issues. Obviously, the spell in the opening sequence is fictional, but it's still creepy. It distracts from an otherwise interesting story. I think you do better with Shakespeare loving dancers, but I'm intrigued enough to stay with it.

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I deleted the previous chapters of Just Ask and am working on a rewrite. I also changed my username. Be careful about how much personal information you put on the internet :D How do I make this my full-time job? Thank you for reading! Please enjoy