All Comments on 'Sweet Awakening'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Baloney!

First thing that happened when he woke up? He bit down hard and ended the whole thing right then and there. Didn't phase him? That doesn't work, even in a fictional story. Badly done drivel.

FailedscoutFailedscoutabout 7 years ago
Damn HOT!!!

Damn, that was one HOT story with a lot of stroke material to it. Of course for 99.9% it is a fantasy that could or would never be able to happen but damn... if I could make this happen, it would be a weekly event.

Thanks for writing and posting here.

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