by Tlong
First thing that happened when he woke up? He bit down hard and ended the whole thing right then and there. Didn't phase him? That doesn't work, even in a fictional story. Badly done drivel.
Damn, that was one HOT story with a lot of stroke material to it. Of course for 99.9% it is a fantasy that could or would never be able to happen but damn... if I could make this happen, it would be a weekly event.
Thanks for writing and posting here.