All Comments on 'Be Mine'

you make your reader feel like they are there....thank you for a wonderful, erotic, tender story.

It was, for me, like putting to words how i have felt myself. Thank you.

thank You Sir...another job well done...You always seem to know what to say and how to say it to make me feel as though i'm there...many thanks!!!!!

*gulps* all i have to say is .... H O T !!!!!

-cryptic

Always the best, Sir Nathan, thank you once more.

---- Bitch

I felt like i was there... sometimes 'no votes' are better than a 1 or a 2 vote!! Don't dwell on the many who don't vote... they do u a favour in a way!!! Will read your other stories now :)

I love all of your stories and your poems are wonderful!! I must tell you one thing, sometimes people do not vote when a story is good because they are otherwise "engaged" ;) if you know hwat I mean, I always take it as a compliment when a reader is too busy to vote, so dont worry about it, you are a great writer. and also, I cant sign my name because my own Maaster would be hurt,I showed his a poem of yours once and he thought I was leaving him. thank you for this story and keep writing, NJ

That was wonderful Sir! As always, I love Your work. This one in particular made me hot and warm and cozy at the same time!

You are a fantastic writer Sir. One of my absolute favorites. In fact, You are the first in my favourties list. Don't worry about the non voters, Sir, as NJ said, they are most likely...busy.

emerald

Dreams from time that's passed me by... subtle memories gripping my heart and bringing blood tears, but thanks. Beautiful. Painfully so when one dwells in lost realms.

There are older dominants out there too, wishing they hadn't missed the boat... it's never too late to find what suits you.

SN

Wow. Just.... wow.

That story was absolutely gorgeous, that's how things should be. Just... transported me to kneeling at my Lord's feet for the first time and that feeling.

Thank You, it really was gorgeous.

You make my panites wet Sir. Would love to submit like that. Thanks for some material to use in my minds eye tonight.

-l

23 yrs. old

I don't usually read this genre, but this is so well written, how could anyone not respond to it? Brilliant!

Mmmmmmm felt very at home this story. ThankYou Sir Natan. kind regards rebecca

master! please! i can only imagine submitting to the likes of you, dear sir :)

This is one of those stories a girl can go back and read...and re-read...and re-read...blushes...or, um, maybe that's just me...laughss

okay i think i have calmed down enough now to type something legible. i felt i was there with Him, fantastic, MORE MORE MORE.

that was really nice

I was given certain tasks to do today from my Dom. He suggested one way that might help me fulfill my task is to read some of your stories. This is my first one Sir_Nathan. It will not be my last. Truly a fantastically arousing read! I could so picture that being me and my Sir. Thank you!

mmmmm loved the story wow so hot reads it over and over again can imagine submitting to a Master im off to keep reading your stories

I liked that the Dominant in the story loved the submissive. I also liked that he teased her and they had a nice teasing dynamic.

Laurie

wonderful, i loved it

Well, it's official, I'm hooked. Your stories send a shiver down my spine, I love them.

...I look for something good to read. You are always high on my list... I have hoarded your stories. Doling them out a few at a time. Open only in an emergency. Once again I am refreshed and inspired. Thank you. xantu

My Top directed me to choose, out of all the stories, one that best represents what would turn me on, get me wet, and want to be His sub.

Sir, I have chosen this because it sends me into sub space and I can feel His love through your words.

Thank You Sir.

bun'

I love the way that the relationship felt real, that these are real people with real facets to their relationships, and that one part of it is Ds.

The caring and actions were genuine and hot.

Sometimes the phrasing was clunky, but I'm not sure how to tell you to improve, I'm still working myself. :)

My heart was calm as I began and it found itself racing as I read on, and on, a tingling began between my legs and I almost came as it reached the end. Where do i find a Man like this, this is the kind of Relationship i yearn for!!

A fan now, for sure...

I loved that it was BDSM with real love in it and real consideration..... Why can't people realise that that is how it should be.

Just the way BDSM should be IMO.

Beautifully written with love and respect

Sir Nathan, Thank you. Finding your stories has helped me articulate to my husband what it is that turns me on about this kind of play and has opened up our discussions on sex in general. I love to read your stories and restrain against touching myself until the sub is encouraged to do so and then I feel like I am right in the moment with your characters. I particularly loved this one, especially with the use of the belt!

That was truly amazing I think you wrote it perfectly

Caught in a relationship that is nowhere near as loving and reciprocal as this one, my tears have welled up. Loved it. Want it.

thank you for share with me

This sounds like the most perfect evening. I know this is how my Master and I would be if we were not strictly online.

There are so many ideas doms but this describes exactly what I'm looking for.

My problem with this whole scene if it was a true scenario is I would never get an orgasm. In 50 years of sex I have only had 2 partnered orgasms. One was a gang rape and when the 4th guy entered me I did squirt although they were too stupid to know that is what is was and thought I had peed. The second was a vanilla sex act in which he was dominant. He took the lead and forced me so to speak. Every other time I had sex the male would get me wet enough to penetrate. Then penetrate and in very short order ejaculate, then roll over and go to sleep or get up and leave. I thought in bdsm sex the woman was at least allowed to cum and have an orgasm. So if it were to find a dom I still would not be allowed to orgasm. That sucks. I give you pleasure but you don't give me any.

the writing technique choppy and distracting. And I say this with trepidation because this author is very much admired on lit. Take care...

Everything about this. I loved this story. I know some other commenters didn't like the writing style, but I thought it added to the effect of how... sensation-based sex is, I guess. Not sure how to phrase what I want to say, but I loved this story. Thank you. :)

My ex liked what she called light bdsm like this. Not a lot of well written stories that are more about the sensations as opposed to just tie-me-up kind of stories,

So loving and so very erotic

The woman in Sir Nathan’s life is one lucky lady.