All Comments on 'Katherine'

by mcfbridge

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Straightforward but enjoyable

Nicely erotic, though the comment that he had won "fair and square" wasn't true...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Fair & square or...

...cheating, any method you have to use to get a pretty woman's phone # or address, YOU USE IT!

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoalmost 20 years ago
Pretty darn good!

Your description of her is lovely. Some typos get in the way of the flow. And proper dialog, rather than "I told her", might add some extra spark.

esl

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