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I like these characters would like to see them explore being in a poly community rather than swingers. Would like to see Kate explore her love of bondage and submission. In the first two stories, Brian seemed more in control and empowered. In this one he was just a stunt cock, she didn't even want him calling her mommy anymore it didn't have the same amount of heat. Fewer people at a time, it was hard to mental keep track of all that was going on. I would like to see Kate explore being in love with other members of the circle while also giving herself completely to Brian.
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Would really like to see Maja, Alexis, and Otto form an intentional family with Kate and Brian. Then move to a condo or a house the five of them share together, possibly somewhere in between the college and the shop. From there it would be good to find out how this intentional family relates to each other and some more of the other three character's backstory, possibly with longer chapters.
Would love to read a next chapter in this series
This series just keeps getting hotter and hotter.
I can see your comment about not planning another chapter
If this is all there is, then this is a good place to stop. One more chapter wouldn't really add much and more than that and you risk this spiraling out of control. This had an ending. It may not be one some want, but it is an ending
I contrast this with "Mom's Mountain Cabin Ch. 02". That pretty much ended on a cliffhanger, and pretty much begs for a conclusion. This does not.
I agree
I truly enjoyed the story but I agree with knightDom concerning the bandage and submission of kate.
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