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I like....
...this a whole lot! I've been there, country fairs in Pennsylvania, Tennessee. This captures their flavor perfectly. Also well-structured -- commas seem appropriate where some periods are, but that is merely a matter of taste and does not detract from the quality of this fine poem.
really nice
puts me in the mood for a fair. :)
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