All Comments on 'Amante III'

just keep getting better and better.

And this:

~Who carries your secrets

carefully as weeping children?

Who holds them close, loves you

even when their fingers are jagged,

even when they cut and hurt? ~

Stunning

Thank you

I need to read parts I and II, if I haven't already. I'd like to read the three of them in order. Will there be more?

y yo soy aqui para ti

Lovely and enchanting - Simple yet with an elegant grace.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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