As always, Doc, you've penned a very intense, gripping erotic tale, with many delicious features to recommend it. I did indeed enjoy the perturbed mutterings of the audience as you described it at the beginning -- if the first performance of Stravinsky's 'Rite of Spring' could provoke an outright riot, certainly a lecture like this would cause a stir.
The sex was, of course, amazing and written with your characteristic flair -- every detail was rich and vivid and stimulating. I confess that what appealed more was the conversation in the carriage and the subtle, subdued teasing there. Forgive me, but for some reason, the shift into high-gear, all-out wanton abandon came just a tad too quickly, although I realize that you weren't aiming to write a novel here. Perhaps it is simply my personal bias, since my favorite works of yours have all been the ones that focus on the slow, delicious process of opening up to the discoveries of one's sexuality.
At any rate, this was yet another work of art that I'll enjoy re-reading several more times. Thanks for sharing!
Thankyou, I have read this story several times over now and I love it so much . . . makes me smile and more . . .
You have captured and enraptured the female mind so well . . . the imagery and thought processes are going to be dancing in my head for ohhhhhh a little while yet.
If I were capable of typing stunned silence, I would. I've liked many of your stories, but this is the first that I've commented on and fallen completely in love with. The characters and the setting were both wonderful, but the emotion and the psychological impact were amazing. Well done, and I can only hope to write half as well as you. Thank you so much for sharing, and I hope to read the rest of your work soon.
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Anonymous05/26/08
Still shuddering
alice_o
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Anonymous06/19/09
Please! Don't! Stop!
Really enjoy your work. Would love to hear more about the Dr. and April; this period has so much potential!
I really enjoyed this story! It had just the right amount of story and just the right amount of sex. The premise is also incredibly intriguing. Got to love those kinky Victorians. I look forward to reading more from you!
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Anonymous12/22/09
More!
I have read this story so many times; it is one of my favorites of yours. Please please write more about April and the doctor. It will make a fantastic series!
I am really, really hoping that there is more to this story. I want to know what else the doctor has in store for April. And how jealous am I of this lucky, lucky girl?!
English
Another savory sampling!
As always, Doc, you've penned a very intense, gripping erotic tale, with many delicious features to recommend it. I did indeed enjoy the perturbed mutterings of the audience as you described it at the beginning -- if the first performance of Stravinsky's 'Rite of Spring' could provoke an outright riot, certainly a lecture like this would cause a stir.
The sex was, of course, amazing and written with your characteristic flair -- every detail was rich and vivid and stimulating. I confess that what appealed more was the conversation in the carriage and the subtle, subdued teasing there. Forgive me, but for some reason, the shift into high-gear, all-out wanton abandon came just a tad too quickly, although I realize that you weren't aiming to write a novel here. Perhaps it is simply my personal bias, since my favorite works of yours have all been the ones that focus on the slow, delicious process of opening up to the discoveries of one's sexuality.
At any rate, this was yet another work of art that I'll enjoy re-reading several more times. Thanks for sharing!
How interesting!
Well-written, and thought-provoking.
I look forward to the next chapter.
This hit a chord with me!
Thankyou, I have read this story several times over now and I love it so much . . . makes me smile and more . . .
You have captured and enraptured the female mind so well . . . the imagery and thought processes are going to be dancing in my head for ohhhhhh a little while yet.
Enjoyed the journey.
Loved going back in time!
Stunned silence...
If I were capable of typing stunned silence, I would. I've liked many of your stories, but this is the first that I've commented on and fallen completely in love with. The characters and the setting were both wonderful, but the emotion and the psychological impact were amazing. Well done, and I can only hope to write half as well as you. Thank you so much for sharing, and I hope to read the rest of your work soon.
Still shuddering
alice_o
Please! Don't! Stop!
Really enjoy your work. Would love to hear more about the Dr. and April; this period has so much potential!
Amazing story!
I really enjoyed this story! It had just the right amount of story and just the right amount of sex. The premise is also incredibly intriguing. Got to love those kinky Victorians. I look forward to reading more from you!
More!
I have read this story so many times; it is one of my favorites of yours. Please please write more about April and the doctor. It will make a fantastic series!
Sigh....
I am really, really hoping that there is more to this story. I want to know what else the doctor has in store for April. And how jealous am I of this lucky, lucky girl?!
Excellent story.
wow.
really enjoyed the story,please write more!!
great story
This really drew me in - off 4 a cold shower now!
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