Big Time Revenge

Really?

This doesn't even deserve a comment.

fourteen inch cock?

get fucking real
one "writer" I'll never waste my time reading again

Stupid

1* for advanced stupidity

Huh?????

Where's the revenge??? 1* for being dreary and boring.

14 " cocks

And twins no less . That's as far as I got . Awful

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A whole new low for LW, what utter garbage, 14 inch cocks, what utter fucking rubbish! When the fuck is lit going to allow MINUS scores???

dead wives tell no lies

1*

Ugh

Fiction, while divorced from reality, are supposed to be grounded in some form of reality. They're supposed to be entertaining. They're supposed to have some form of drama and tension.

This story has none of these things. I kept reading in the hope of some glimmer of resolution or vindication.

Nope. None.

Just too stupid...

14 inch cocks, a wife turning into a slut just to get back at husband??? This story feels like a 15 year old boy wrote it...

No news

Another daily baboon

New level of stupidity

Both by this baboon author and Literotica

A PILE OF DOG FARTS

Please, author. Go get a frontal lobotomy, drink arsenic, shoot yourself but please, please STOP WRITING THESE HORRIBLE STORIES.

There are no words

A new low. Couldn't even begin to finish whatever this is.

What a pile of garbage!

Dear oh dear, whatever possessed the author - and I use the word advisedly - to write this farcical and impossible pile of crap !

Revenge?

Revenge? Revenge on whom? I only see on herself! A woman that goes so low, can't love or respect herself. She even doesn't love, care and respect her child, exposing her to this kind of relationship! Maybe in a few years they will be fucking the daughter too with her approval! Then only "fourteen inch" cocks? To make it different why not 18"? This is so bad that as someone said: this is "A new low" in LW! 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Truly....

A new low for this site.No vote .It would denigrate the one.

should have checked the rating

before I read this garbage.

REVENGE IS NEVER A DOUBLE HAPPY TIME

lest one forget what started this fiasco. TK U MLJ LV NV

1*

absurd cuck shit.

Truly

stupid. I am really curious as to your reasoning for making the cocks fourteen inches. I mean, why? It took me right out of the story. If that's your own personal fantasy fine, whatever, but it probably won't work as entertainment for too many other folks.

Also, the wife committed the greater wrong by allowing Bevis and Butthead access to their child. Terrible parenting bordering on abuse.

On value at all

10 minutes of my life I'll never get back

Really?

Not worth the read

Drivel!

What, exactly, was the point?

Why not

Read the highest rated stories here and in a couple of other categories and then craft a story with at least a bit of thought put into it.

If you are going to do something you might as well put a decent amount of effort into it otherwise there really is no point.

1*

Did you climb out of the sewer author? Well, climb back in.

So bad I have no words capable of commenting this

It's like someone asking us to comment a turd!
But what to expect from a story favorited by @peteswick and @systech24? Both rule in favoriting shitty stories!

Haha

Is this a joke?

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Good story

At least I think there was a good story in your head. It just did not make it to the page.

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A wasted 3 minuet read. Whore wife fucking , femdom trash. # 1

What a waste of time.

Fourteen inch cocks? Don't make me laugh. Beyond stupid. And she can't prevent him from coming home. It's his home and unless she has a Court order he can move back in at any time. Of she can divorce him, but that takes time. He's going to divorce her after seeing the giant cocks rip her apart. He knows that he'll never be able to feel the walls of her cheap cunt and that sex with her will be a non event going forward. She doesn't want him back anyway. She just wants to punish him. If he was smart, he'll struggle and get rope burns. After being released he'll call the cops and claim he was forced. At least he'll get a bigger piece of their assets while she's in jail. And at the end? She never had any brains to fuck out. Idiotic story not worth the time spent to read it.
No stars.

Why?

Why would want to come home to that?
Why would she want doubled 14" dicks. Her posterior fornix would be bruised and torn. Hardly the recipe for sexual ecstasy.
Why would you write his tripe?
Why did I read this? 5 minutes I can never reclaim.
Please, don't write chapter 2. Or anything else. Please.

Fantasy, But

Even a fantasy must have some connection to real life and real people for readers to imagine themselves in the story to enjoy it.

The worst

Unquestionably the worst story I've ever read on lit, and that is saying a lot

What an idiotic bunch of shit!!! MINUS 5*!!!

Only real brain sick people write such a crap!!! And only idiots or perverts powered by their lechery can approve with your shit!!!

More realistic would have been better

So far fetched was not very good

Comments are unanimous

Take a hint.

BTW I agree with the unanimity.

Not very good at all.

But thanks for the effort.

Your first story. Make it your last as well. Total crap. I gave up reading it

"Tim knew it was over"

who cares?

A complete

And total waste of time, please go eat shit and die.

lord help us

Oh my! What was this? All I can say is that it is so bad that I can't stop laughing.

WTF - is this another alias submission by the cuck/wimp idiots of bt2 & wantswhiteboys?

Seems like it - the plot line is pathetic at best and reeks of those mentally challenged simple cell amoebas. Puke!

Really horrible story

It has no twists, no objective and is completely unbelievable.

Must be something in the air today.

I've never seen so many wasted electrons. 1*

ALTERNATIVE EROTIC LOVING WIVES STORY FACTS

It's true. It is. It's great. It's beautiful. It is. It's true. It is.
And the Mexicans will love it. They will. It's true.

As soon as I read anything about a 14" cock

the story gets an automatic 1.

Funny. Sure it's stupid.

Oh, well. It was fun to write.