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by jlynann

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bikoukumoribikoukumoriabout 7 years ago
Interesting

I like it so far but you could do with an editor.

I was expecting a siren at first but the twist to a somewhat cursed mermaid is really interesting.

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Liked the story, but yeah u need an editor, it's written sloppily

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