All Comments on 'On the Loveseat Ch. 04'

You wrote Chapter 4 coming soon at the end of this chapter, but this was Chapter 4.

Doesn`t matter whether you got chapter 4 wrong at the end we all knew what you meant, no problem just keep on writing.

We all hope they will brake the promise again. Awesome story. Please write more chapters, dont stop on 5 or 6

Thanks for background on sisters rivalry on men. Explains a lot on what happened and what will happen in future chapters

Never thought of sibling rivalry

I am as hard as Jeremy

This guy's kind of a jerk. Smug. Arrogant. Thinks he's cute. Doesn't show respect.

Jenny voluntarily swallowed her son's entire load just so there wasn't a mess. Well, that wasn't the only reason. She loves it! She even had an orgasm thinking about "Jeremy shooting his delicious sperm into her mouth." I loved this chapter!

By far it's gotta tie for best with CH. 03

I came three times in less than 10 mins while reading this

I thought the premise was good but I felt like the main character was childish. I was hoping he'd try to seduce her. I guess you were setting a back story for the rivalry so I get it but idk just kinda ruined this chapter for me.

Maybe that's just his character but the story is awesome *****.

I was so lucky to have my aunt and mom. Aunt was first when my mom left with a sugar daddy and left me to live with her younger sister. I didn't get into mom until she came back a couple years later. Now I enjoy them both. Keep writing!

Why did this bozo end this chapter with CH 4 coming soon DUH

Same old stuff

Great to see things escalating. Be good to see how aunt Jess responds. Let the rivalry continue may the best sister win (although Jeremy's clearly the real winner, lucky fella!) 5 stars

It could be much better. The protagonist's reaction is so nonchalant and almost nonexistent that it kind of ruins it. That's all he says to his mother after that? "Cya mom, thanks for sucking my cock; going to play basketball now,"? Really disappointing to say the least, I hope you work on relationships more. Also: Not sure how many would agree with me, but it'd be nice if you released it all at once, even at the expense of a longer wait. Either way, I really hope you take what I said in consideration.

Interesting that Jeremy's Mom latched onto him so quickly and sucked him off. She now has opened that horny and rivalry door again. Yes, she will suck her son off again But maybe screw him too as his big cock is there. The rivalry will happen and both girls will have a contest with Jeremy. This will be fun and it will escalate this sex situation.

Cannot wait for more chapters. Maybe; Jeremy will screw them both since huge has a big cock and a big load to give ??

Disappointed in son's treatment of Jenny, but good otherwise.

Good story, simple lines but very sexual, the mom and sister had no trouble doing the son and nephew, I could see this happening in somewhere USA. Needs to be written all at one time though.

Remember, Jeremy is, as he has told us previously, "no virgin". If all this had been his first time with sex, I would have expected him to go all lovey-dovey-kissy-poo with his mom, his aunt, or both. But he knows he can get his ashes hauled elsewhere if need be - hence the nonchalance.

For both of them!

Maybe a compliment and a hug, but not this.

Please write all chapters at one time

Makes perfect sense in this fun story!

Loving the series!

Thanks!!!

It was so much hotter when they were doing it on the Loveseat, while pretending nothing was going on. Bringing it out into the open, with Jeremy simply ordering his mom to jerk him off like it's nothing, like she's just a whore, massively diminished the erotic nature of the story, making it just another flash story lost in the multitude of dull 'slut mom gets used like trash' stories on here. Pity. Up to this point, this was highly erotic and hot.

beautiful