All Comments on 'Business Liaisons Ch. 04'

Slow and tantalizing is the pace of the novella. Just enough description to make it interesting and erotic.

Would like Cyndi to consider tying a couple of "her chapters" into a single chapter so we don't get tantalized and teased too much.

Hooked on the "Business".

In the words of Chandler Bing, ". . . Can you WRITE any slower?" You are, for whatever reason, calling a couple of paragraphs a "chapter".I'll wait for the proverbial movie!!!!

I thinks its great 'LIKE A QUICKIE' or a good warm up for a workout " Patients people its a sign of good things to come"