by Nightcaps
You write well few repeats or wasted words.
While the sex is important to the character development the plot needs work too.
Maybe 60% plot V 40% lust
djb
This was so enjoyable to read! I loved the character and plot development. Your writing style is so refreshing. Please upload the next chapter soon!
Thanks djb and anonymous! Your comments are really encouraging to hear! I'm so glad you guys are liking the story so far <3
As has been said before, the character development and plot are great. Can't wait for the next chapter.