by Tonisshy
You say:
"This is purely fiction. I am in no way a writer I just enjoy these fantasies as I don't have any other outlet to actually dress and be the gurl within me."
I say:
All well and good. But you can't write or even construct a decent story..
Tonisshy you keep being who you are and write how you want. We get better by doing it more and receiving helpful criticism. keep going gurl