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A Lullaby

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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata07/02/04

Very

touching and so sad..
Thank you

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by Mia Moore07/02/04

surrender,

and acceptance beautiful :)

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by tarablackwood2207/03/04

good job...

...DM. You worked hard on this, and those who saw its early version could not help but be impressed here. From poem to poem, clear improvement is being displayed!

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by WickedEve07/03/04

really good

Good poetry. I enjoyed this one very much. :)

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by My Erotic Tail07/05/04

Heart felt~

Excellent poetry, well delivered. High five! Smiles (~_*)

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by 07/24/04

poignant

wistful smiles.. thanks DM.

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by LeBroz12/15/06

~~

Here's a lullaby of a different sort
As one's love grows silent and cold
And slips the earth's bonds
For all eternity in heaven's realm.

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by duddle14612/18/06

To late

A wife dying hears rambling words from her regretful husband ~ before he can confess ~ she dies. Sad moody rendering

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